HopelessRomantic32 - Profile

I enjoy the novel. If I had to voice a complaint for 40 characters' sake, it would be that chinese names are different variations of dropping spoons down the stairs, and on occasion, I mix them up.. as does the author. :) on a serious note, you've done great writing this story so far, and I wish you luck on your continued writing because I'll be coming along. :P

While the grammar at times can be a little hard to sift through, its a story that I have absolutely loved following so far, and you've done more then enough to earn another reader for the rest of your time writing this story, I sincerely hope that it gets to the conclusion because you've done an excellent job.

I do not have many complaints, I've enjoyed the story so far and look forward to continuing it. My only complaint is that I caught up and have to wait for more.

I have really enjoyed this story so far, and I find myself looking forward to continuing it. If I was forced to make one small suggestion, it would be that at times the words used during smut scenes like Yeah, come off as a bit odd. It's not something that ever bothered me too much, but just a small suggestion that maybe it could flow a little smoother.