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Moments 568
Don’t they say there is a fine line between love and hate ? 🧐
The irritating cawing would replenish her energy level. Her tears would dry up and as she chased around the bird, she forgot everything else.
The Archduke's Songbird
Fantasy · Golda
Great information here. Honestly the read is good. There is quite a bit of information dump the first chapter (not this where I’m commenting but, the next chapter) which is common with writing because you’re wanting to set up the reader for your story/adventure you have mapped out in your head for them. I highly recommend we talk offline if you want on discord or where ever so you don’t feel like anything is being picked on. Like I said great read fun back story but, a few things could be adjusted so it seems more of a natural flow for the readers in the beginning & setting up everything. If not for this novel then maybe tips & tricks for your next one.
ch 0 -1 Characters Info
Hel and the Emerald Sky City
Fantasy · NastyRaven888
Awwww just like when River &, Annalise’s father, Phillip met or Phillip & Rafael!
They were both smiling so that was a good sign they could get along well but Scarlet didn't care for their game and walked away to find herself food. "Men."
The Resilient Lady Collins
History · Violet_167
Maybe she wanted to kill her but the father spared her… 🤔
"It's been so long that I do not remember. You would need to check the records of the servants who worked here. You must know that the cottage is set to be ruined. Your mother wants to plant a large tree there and to expand the garden," Tom revealed. "Perhaps some of your answers are there. Excuse me."
The Resilient Lady Collins
History · Violet_167
She’s saying she’d pay to have Ian leave but refers to him, as the man who doesn’t want to let someone know their life is in danger; the someone being Dorothy.
"I'll pay you more than any of your other clients have paid if you get the needed man who doesn't want me to tell someone their life is in danger out of my estate right now," said Scarlet.
The Resilient Lady Collins
History · Violet_167
Leonard didn't need Nolan to speak as his silence answered. "While I appreciate your concern for my daughter, do not meddle. That is my job as her father, not for a man who may be jealous that she has moved on to someone else. I find what you are doing now to be foolish."
The Resilient Lady Collins
History · Violet_167
Is she particular about her tea because of how Alfred made tea for Edgar
Scarlet frowned. "Shouldn't you be making me a second pot of tea?"
The Resilient Lady Collins
History · Violet_167
Remember when Riverr “let" his son-in-law borrow his clothes… 🤭
"Don't be ridiculous. Everything belonging to him was packed up and sent away. There are clothes left behind from when some of my relatives came to visit. There should be something to fit you and if you need to, you can wash up in the room," said Scarlet.
The Resilient Lady Collins
History · Violet_167
While years ago the Callahans and Woods, the people who owned the border, formed a truce to work with the Castro King, they were more loyal to the family. Luke could lose their loyalty should he not think properly.
The Resilient Lady Collins
History · Violet_167
Callahan’s… is that River
"Another letter from the palace and one from your relatives. The Callahans," Florence quickly added before Scarlet could be annoyed. Florence moved the letters from the small table by the door and placed them in Scarlet's hands. "Please follow me to the kitchen, Mr. Kingsley."
The Resilient Lady Collins
History · Violet_167
Leonis?
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She belongs to the Demon King
Fantasy · AnnieQuin
Your grandpa Elijah’s father got married to your great grandmother because of a contract 🤣
If only she could share that this was all because of a contract, but not only would it go against what she and Ian agreed to. Scarlet knew that her parents might be a little disappointed. It wouldn't make sense to them for her to have this kind of relationship with anyone.
The Resilient Lady Collins
History · Violet_167
She’ll punch 😵💫🥊 him & that will help take his mind off if it
Ian wanted to kick himself for mentioning that she used her mouth as a way to tease her because it only ended with his problem becoming worse.
The Resilient Lady Collins
History · Violet_167
His* 🥰
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The Resilient Lady Collins
History · Violet_167
Hello lovely story & excited for this one but. Previously there was mentioned 4 chapters still remaining for Hating Her Duke which chapters are those in this book? These are all explaining the crossington incident so far & not a continuation of where Hating Her Duke left off at…
ch 0 1 Prologue 1
HATING HER KING
History · Tiny_Psalm
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He looked at the bottom of her dress stained with wet mud. He had told her to sit back while he did what she wanted with a garden or to let a servant do it, but she wanted to do it herself. The poor weeds did not deserve to get pulled out with so much anger.
The Knight's Mysterious Maid
History · Violet_167
She’s a witch who cursed you & Jerrick…. & she’s not dead. She killed their child as a sacrifice or something I am convinced.
Imogen is dead!
The Archduke's Songbird
Fantasy · Golda