Bradley_McMaster_5865

9mth

Commented

is it just me or have i read this before but much further ahead with it show all the 7 who nick named themselves after the sins and the unkown 8th soul who seemed to know them but was never explained. did you pick up this novel to write or are you the original authour ? either way is fine im just curious.

ch 11 Wrath[3]-Fear of Death

Valkron's Vampire God

Fantasy · Azurian_Element

Bradley_McMaster_5865

9mth

Commented

skills can no longer be upgraded by continuous use. How is that not downgrading the system when the mc had them promise with a pact that they could not do that?

ch 11 The Dungeon

The Gamer's System

Games · Campoccino

Bradley_McMaster_5865

1yr

Commented

good start this story definitely has potential to be great.

ch 0 1 1. The Fate Devouring System

Fate Devouring System

Fantasy · Lucifer_Mors

Bradley_McMaster_5865

1yr

Posted

the story is good but the development is completely blocked due to turning the MC's system and ally against him out of nowhere without any explanation why, which in turn caused writers block which makes this web novel as practically dropped status without it actually showing it.

Pokémon en un mundo de fantasía

Fantasy · Kivag_Zero_Tempest

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