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www*69shuba*pro/book/9920741/ Title : Dad's Comic Life / 奶爸的漫画人生 translate using web browser, the transplation not too bad. But a little boring because there are a lot of repetitive plot or reaction when MC publish the manga. Even the original author end it bcz of that too if i am not wrong at chapter 472

www*69shuba*pro/book/9920741/ Title : Dad's Comic Life / 奶爸的漫画人生 translate using web browser, the transplation not too bad. But a little boring because there are a lot of repetitive plot or reaction when MC publish the manga. Even the original author end it bcz of that too if i am not wrong at chapter 472

Original : 重建涡之国，开局爆兵护庭十三队 MTL: Rebuilding the Kingdom of Whirlpool, starting with the Gotei Thirteenth Army already 162 chapter

oh I've read the raw one using Google translate. already 471 chapter

too Chinese but overall not bad. The mc not a beta n not sigma either, kinda troller. the relationship between mc fl and daughter heartwarming, but a lot of repetitive things such as mc got new work then the reader comment.

at leat make the name of the characters consistent. its kinda hard to read. not about the grammar, more about the logic. to hard to understand

it's kinda a little dark and also a little little little little CRINGE 😬

nice one 👍👍 can't wait for more 🎉 wish u all the best

this fanfic really good. i recommend this

kinda so so. real chapter to short and not recommended

55 chapter only around 10% real chapter. The chapter are short too. Hope u got all the money u want sir👍