For starters I like the way the story goes. Quite interesting though it need some work at the early stage. I like the way your writing got better as you wrote it shows you learn from your mistakes. Keep it up don’t let anyone talk you down
Sci-fi · joshua_jt3
So far I would say it has been a good book. The writing quality is good and the plot is quite nice. I hope to see how it goes. Keep it up.
Fantasy · _King_Ace
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
Webnovel 
For starters I like the way the story goes. Quite interesting though it need some work at the early stage. I like the way your writing got better as you wrote it shows you learn from your mistakes. Keep it up don’t let anyone talk you down
MY MUTANT SYSTEM
Sci-fi · joshua_jt3