I found myself pleasantly enjoying the book. It is well paced and there is something about the simplicity of the opening which is quite appealing. That is despite the presence of some errors in tense and grammar, which fascinatingly enough do not take anything away from a very enjoyable storyline. Again the plot is amazingly simply and quite enjoyable. Well done on creating a story that is easy to follow and makes for pleasant reading.
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Much appreciated.
I read chapter1 and was left with the impression of the beginning of a very interesting story full of intrigue. The storyline is well plotted and evenly placed with clear descriptions of the backdrop in which the story is unfolding.
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Interesting storyline that's for sure.
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A compelling read by all standards. Though I must admit from your description it made wish you had included a pic of Flower. Good effort.
The billionaire's cook
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