So this novel definitely has its assets and a few shortcomings, but all in all it was an engaging read. I find the pacing and flow to be quite smooth. Most authors engage in some degree of pace-pausing descriptions and explanations which cut the flow. But this novel flows from event to event without amy pauses and that's not something that's easily done. As long ad the author learns when and where to apply this and when and where not to, I think they'll be fine.
Fantasy · Darkswan
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So this novel definitely has its assets and a few shortcomings, but all in all it was an engaging read. I find the pacing and flow to be quite smooth. Most authors engage in some degree of pace-pausing descriptions and explanations which cut the flow. But this novel flows from event to event without amy pauses and that's not something that's easily done. As long ad the author learns when and where to apply this and when and where not to, I think they'll be fine.
Ascension of the Monster Queen
Fantasy · Darkswan