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so true, noticed how the mc went from like 20-21 year old before chapters 430 and when he took the lifespan extending drug he was now like in his mid thirties?

The story is fine as long as you don't think too much. If you do start thinking though, there are so many dumb stuff over the first 430 chapters and after the 430 chapters. Just to note, the whole story completely changes after the first 430 chapters.A notable mention pre-430 chapters:- Mentions having 2 8 star blacksmiths and then mentions 7 stars being the limit in the span of like 10 chapters (7 star being the limit was after)- A random cultivator ascending to an higher world doesn't make any sense in the context since we never really see anyone above 7 stars even though 8 and 9 stars seems to be mentionned and the highest ranked people are only at 7 stars.About the post 430 chapter mark. Everything about the story just changes. The translation quality drastically drops, "china #1" kind of behavior appears (MC literally makes a drug which extends lifespan only for Chinese people because it "costs less points", which doesn't even make sense since that's more of an extra feature than a removal of a feature for it to cost more). The whole forging system doesn't exist anymore, I'm not even sure magic still exists anymore since it's never mentioned ever after. The whole star ranking system completely disappears, there are no more ranks, there are no more cultivators. The whole research and development system literally takes the MC days to develop a world changing thing. Oh, also, the MC got a girlfriend sometimes during the story apparently although it was never mentionned. The MC also apparently went from being a 20-21 year old to something like a 36-37 year old man according to his own lifespan extending drug, that age change just happened magically. In short: this story started average and it became complete trash after 430 chapters, not even making any sense anymore.

The translation starts getting so bad that you need to get used to characters getting called multiple names even in the same paragraph due to how inconsistent it is. Also there's stupid stuff towards chapter 92-96 and 115, in my opinion. What happens there is a mix of "China #1" stuff, complete lack of understanding from the author of what he is writing about. There is literally only one correct thing being said in all those chapters about the subject. Whenever I see the character in question I quite literally cringe due to how bad it is.

Also don't burn yourself out by making too many chapters, 1-2 chapter per 3 day is fine as is it is in my opinion to maintain quality.

Pretty interesting story as of now. Story doesn't feel rushed or anything, the story is also very coherent so it"s easy to follow. The characters are interesting however there is not many characters that we were presented as of yet in the first 22 chapters. Only thing I dislike is the MC really is only cultivating each chapter and he basically has no interactions with any other characters.