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Why is he getting angry at simple taunts? He should know that he's not really a bastard. Also, all the time "he grit his teeth", or "clenched his jaw".... Can he not taunt or insult back??

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Thanks for the chapter. But it's getting annoying that he keeps saying "it is a familiar world", but he doesn't bother finding which world it is....

Thanks for the chapter. The end was good. He must not forget that, in the end, GoT is a "might makes right" world...

Good luck. Waiting for next chapters

Ok. Thanks for telling that

Thanks for the chapters

In the first chapter, MC said how Apolyon would want him to be honorable and defend the village. Now, he does this???

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Thanks for chapter. Question- why was he sent for fostering? It seems only to keep similar to canon. 1. Steffon (MC's father) knows that all the prosperous projects are done by MC and fostering would interrupt that. 2. Jon Arryn would expect that MC use his projects at Vale too, and Steffon should know that..... 3. Fostering is usually done to create alliance or teach the child. MC is also smart genius, and alliance can be created by other ways too.....

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Forced nerf for plot?

Your last note/rant is Agreed. Canon fact- Naruto learned Shadow clones just from a scroll within a few hours. Fact- Naruto had massive chakra reserves, yet he learnt tree walking in the same duration as Sasuke (supposed genius) during the Wave arc.... Fact- He learnt the Rasengan (very powerful and difficult) within 1-2 months.... Naruto's learning capabilities are genius, it's just that no one of his teachers paid attention to it.

Why does it need experience for jutsu that he sees... Can't the Sharingan already copy jutsu? Seems like a forced nerf.

Man!! What a disappointing chapter. This story was good for 49 chapters, but the last 2 chapters were stupid. Also, the last chapter made it seem like hundreds of jounin had accused him. Now, there were only 2.... Seriously, Hiruzen is "powerless" and has to hold a trial against a Kage level ninja for 2 jounin??? The most disappointing is the MC.... 70℅ template should not only be strength and jutsus, it should also be politics, diplomacy, how to speak and charm, etc. If Tsunade hadn't shown up, would the MC have remained quiet and accepted everything....

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This story was going so good. But then this chapter seemed so stupid. 1. MC is a war hero, and Kage level ninja. They should be trying to win his loyalty, instead of antagonising him. 2. Hiruzen being powerless to stop the trial is stupid. How many situations in cannon were sweeped under the rug by Hiruzen and Danzo. And don't say about "witnesses". If Hiruzen really wanted it swept under the rug, he could have said anything and it would be believed. 3. The family part- After this trial thing, MC should honestly tell them that he just came back from war as a hero, and if they care more about honor than him, then he'll have nothing to do with them.....

50% of Tobirama was enough to defeat Kage level. So, 70% should be more than enough to intimidate Hiruzen if needed. Remember, it was only after Hashirama and Tobirama's death, that everyone started calling themselves strongest (Onoki, Hiruzen, Hanzo of the Salamander, etc.). Earlier, they didn't have the guts to do it. It would be good if the MC doesn't accept this like Sakumo did in cannon....

Thanks for the chapter.