Random_Foxs - Profile

Read up to Chapter 100 so far and enjoy the story as a whole. The only issue is the amount of pronouns that are used incorrectly. This issue has become more obvious as I approached Chapter 100, and it disturbs the flow of the story. Hopefully, the author fixes this as having to correct the pronouns in my head every time Amalia is referred to as "he" or another character's gender seemingly changes, makes reading difficult. Also, if possible, it would be nice to have a constant update of Amalia's cultivation process rather than just knowing that she's become stronger. Like telling us when she's become the next level (not anything major though)

I enjoyed the story quite a lot. Would have preferred it to focus on one relationship rather than a harem, but the story was interesting, and the harem didn't overshadow the main storyline so it could be overlooked. However, the main drawbacks were the story ending too abruptly and certain characters being mentioned once and never again when they're set up to appear again.The ending is just disappointing as certain elements such as the Shao Family's ending and the FL & main ML's relationship could have been fleshed out further to make the ending more satisfying."Everything was settled.." is really a disappointing final line as there were many things that we never saw settled and the ending for the Shao Family is left ambiguous as we're only told their in "a state of turmoil for a time". The dismantling of the family is incomplete