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Moments 213
I have really enjoyed this story. It was well written, there are some words and sentences that aren’t quite right but in all it is good. Here for example infamous is used incorrectly. The Wanky’s are now infamous (famous in a bad way) the wedding dress should be something positive that is being anticipated. You could have used anticipated instead of infamous here.
The infamous wedding dress had been completed months before, and like Mirabel's other designs, it was simply amazing!
Diva la Vida
Urban · Loctovia
My heart broke for Thalia for all that she went through. Looking forward to the next volume. 😊
ch 165 Jorge’s Reaction
Diva la Vida
Urban · Loctovia
It’s actually all Joy’s fault. She gave Her son the false DNA reports and he went crazy and tried to kill Jim son. And ended up paralyzed
"It's all the fault of that Thalia girl! If she had not caused this accident, these words would not have come out of Elian's mouth!"
Diva la Vida
Urban · Loctovia
Wow true colors shining brightly
"Why did you expect me to marry a cripple? I will not subject myself to a life of torture to take care of an invalid."
Diva la Vida
Urban · Loctovia
😮💨 She should have just left that same day. What did she need to wait for. Pack up and leave
ch 156 Charles’ Decision (2)
Diva la Vida
Urban · Loctovia
Agh poor Thalia. What an aweful mother and father and stupid son.
ch 137 Fiancée (4)
Diva la Vida
Urban · Loctovia
I thought Collin was 6?
Mirabel covered her mouth and blushed furiously. She looked around fervently, wishing that no one had heard Flora. Yes, it had been eight years, if not more, since she had had any sexual engagement with anyone.
Diva la Vida
Urban · Loctovia
It’s weird this is the same as chapter 177. The last one was the same as 176 but then it changed after a while. I’m not sure what is happening. Hopefully this one will change after a while too.
ch 181 Durfort Inc. Innovations
Husband Upgrade: Heiress's First Love
Urban · wounded_warrior
I agree, it shouldn’t be repeated again.
"Dad, you once told me that beauty lies inside the hearts of the people," Li Xia asserted as she tilted her head slightly to look at her father. "You were wrong about that," her father remained silent and just kept gazing at his daughter with an amused smile.
Mr. Arrogant CEO's Fiesty Beauty
Urban · _Carolina_writes_
This is the same as chapter 176
ch 180 Not as Easy
Husband Upgrade: Heiress's First Love
Urban · wounded_warrior
Thank you for making Alexi the father! 🫶🫶
I am enjoying the book so far. One thing I’ve noticed is that the word glared is used a lot and in most cases it is not used correctly. Glare means and angry look or stare.
Father was transferred to the ward but he was still unconscious, I glared at the time and it was 6 pm. Mother turned towards me after checking the time as well "You should go back and prepare dinner" she said and I frowned.
THE CEO'S PREMIER PASSION
Urban · T_RAE_23
Omg now I see. It’s Chloe and Mackie and Diamond. 🫶🫶🫶
"Sit down, let's have a talk! Oh, my name is Chloe Phoenix Gray; I'm Valerie, Cedric and Mackenzie's mother!" Chloe introduced herself in an energetic and friendly manner. She was chatty but pleasant to listen to.
She Becomes A Hot Sensation After A Scandalous Affair
Urban · ForeverPupa
I can’t wait to see what comes next. I love seeing Tristan changing and redeeming himself to bring Bella back to his side. Although I like Sean and the unconditional support he has always given Bella, it is clear that she does not love him. Also his covert career and long periods away brings more danger to her and Dax. She already has enough to deal with her own family so I prefer her reuniting with Tristan who will be with her to keep her safe. Can’t wait for the next part to see them take on everything together and see their love grow. 🫶🫶🫶
ch 194 I Will Respect You And Wait
My Billionaire Ex-Husband Chase Me Back
Urban · PurpleLight
❤️❤️🫶🫶😍😍
ch 188 Live Under The Same Roof?
My Billionaire Ex-Husband Chase Me Back
Urban · PurpleLight
Great read. The characters, the turmoil they endured, their redemption and growth made the journey worthwhile. 🫶🫶
Diva la Vida
Urban · Loctovia