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Good start to the novel. The story is blend of mystery, slight romance(currently but probably more in the future), fantasy. The characters in the novel are well developed and not rushed at all. Furthermore, the plot is engaging and I just can’t wait for more chapters to be released.

Story is really wholesome and well written with a very good plot. Brilliant character development and good world-building. It’s an absolute masterpiece!!

Brilliant work from the author, little to no mistakes in grammer and emotions of characters portrayed very well.

Good start for the novel. Pacing is very good and the characters are well written and a lot of mystery behind the characters.

No worries. And on the top of my head can’t say anything now about feedback as your doing incredible for a first time writing. All I ask is that you update regularly which you are. 👍👍

Just binged all the chapters and I would like to say I’m thoroughly impressed. Story is good, pacing is quite fast but still very good. Also there is little to no grammer mistakes. Also the characters are well written and Michael’s(Mc) personality is really likeable. Hope you continue your awesome work author👍👍

This honestly has the potential to become a really really good novel. Brilliant start so far and no grammar mistakes identified. Also, the mc’s personality and character is something I like a lot👍👍