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Moments 932
he has time to talk?
"Ling Chong, I'm flattered you think so highly of me, using advanced martial arts against me!"
Sky Ruler Martial Spirit
Eastern · Thousand miles of dust
too much exposition. none of this is necessary.
ch 0 3 Chapter 3 Mountain and River Martial Soul_1
Sky Ruler Martial Spirit
Eastern · Thousand miles of dust
stupid
However, after Ling Xiao joined the Ling Clan, Ling Yu started to see him in a new light and even took the initiative to get closer and befriend him, which filled Ling Xiao with pride. He was determined to go further in martial arts and make a name for himself within the Ling Clan.
Sky Ruler Martial Spirit
Eastern · Thousand miles of dust
stupid and boring. make him inexperienced. he doesn't want to be in the dungeon, he is scared of monsters and scared of death and intimidated by the hunters, but he's here anyway for X reason and he doesn't have another choice for Y reason. this way he has more room to grow.
Rem didn't look a day older than 14, yet he didn't show any emotion towards the death of the Goblin.
The Monster Monarch System
Fantasy · Izana07
useless exposition
ch 0 1 Rem's First Dungeon
The Monster Monarch System
Fantasy · Izana07
really? that's the best surname you could think of?
Name: Alex Vorax
Devouring the Apocalypse
Urban · GreaterLord26
useless exposition
ch 0 2 Chapter 2: This is just a dream!
Devouring the Apocalypse
Urban · GreaterLord26
stupid skill
Looking at the list of five skills, Ling Yi only hesitated for a moment before choosing [Starfall].
God's Path: I Can Create A Lot Of Cheats Through Mutation
Sci-fi · Million Phantom God
Why not just save up Evolution points and increase other stuff without evolving?
ch 0 6 Chapter 6 Explosive News_1
Global Catastrophe: I Became the World Tree
Sci-fi · Crystal head
"Master! You did so well on your first try! You should train more!" Louise's adorable baby face cleansed all the system messages.
Leveling Up with My Adorable Monster Girl Harem!
Fantasy · Sixth
With her by his side, Leon realized just how short she was. While he towered at 190cm, Louise was 155cm at most, and that gap was pretty noticeable. She was much cuter, though!
Leveling Up with My Adorable Monster Girl Harem!
Fantasy · Sixth
??
Leon gazed at her for a while, wiped off some of them, then looked away and stared at the cloudless sky, "Yes, it is."
Leveling Up with My Adorable Monster Girl Harem!
Fantasy · Sixth
unnatural and clunky
Leon smiled faintly at her, and as she looked deeply into his eyes, he replied, "Life is what you make it. I'd be honored to help you make it merrier. See, I hate being alone. And I just appeared in this world, so I'll take the lead and invite you to my party. Louise, would you like to adventure with me?"
Leveling Up with My Adorable Monster Girl Harem!
Fantasy · Sixth
HP is a stupid concept outside of a game.
[Leon Blade Lv. 1(0/50) HP: 1000/1000 MP: 1000/1000]
Leveling Up with My Adorable Monster Girl Harem!
Fantasy · Sixth
unnecessary exposition
Then the orders from above fell upon him, and he whispered... "Not only I can't tell him that the peak humanity's body attracts and accepts the opposite gender of the same quality, but you also want me to personally oversee his test and increase the level. Is he the new kind I'll grow to hate?"
Leveling Up with My Adorable Monster Girl Harem!
Fantasy · Sixth
A bit much. Rather than this he should be angry at the cloak man.
Leon hadn't interrupted the black spirit, but he stood with boiling heart: his hands were clenched, his face was scrunched deeply, and he was trembling. Tears streaked down from his left eye while his right remained on the black spirit's hood, seemingly ready to answer him at any moment.
Leveling Up with My Adorable Monster Girl Harem!
Fantasy · Sixth
Cringe. Have mature women act like mature women, not blushing schoolgirls. It's annoying.
Miss Kim suddenly realized she had been standing silently for too long and she quickly tried to get her composure back. She was acting like a school girl with a silly crush!
Picking Up Beautiful Girls In The Post-Apocalyptic World!
Urban · D_RegalInsomniac
The more I think about your plot the less sense it makes. How did REACH turn their drinks into the zombie virus and why? Why does destroying them mean that the drink never gets distributed, can they not find another advertiser?
ch 15 Departure Time
Picking Up Beautiful Girls In The Post-Apocalyptic World!
Urban · D_RegalInsomniac
strong start
ch 0 1 Prologue
My Skills Are All Max-Level
Games · SpacesSnips