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I loved this chapter

Sus..

Honestly...more dungeon than actual story maybe the real story is the dungeon lol

So is he going to save rias or what or does he just plan to just not do anything about her situation even though he took boosted gear? Because he's spending allot of time with Rias and the rest of them just to not help them... because we know nothing about the mcs plans or dreams at least not that I noticed anything like that so far..so far it's like he only wants to become stronger to survive and doesn't really care about living his life at this point at least that's what it looks like to me..if he's going to keep this attitude then go sao if he's actually going to enjoy life go to danmachi

It's good...no idea there was a rewritten version..

Well the time skip was nice at least...

Don't you mean clock...

Luna isn't supposed to be with them...

Too bad she didn't die..I kind of feel like shes brought up way too many times a nice death would've fixed that and like her going out to fight when she didn't need to especially when she has a son and even that didn't stop her...just bring out the scythe please honestly..she's just his mom does she even have a reason to be brought up so many times

Free style it? Lol

It's became very hard to understand

I didn't understand the second part of this chapter almost unreadable

Honestly not my cup of tea..to me it feels like the story is over before it began because he instantly became op for no reason...

Um...

I wish there was more story than dungeon honestly..it's good though thank you for the chapters!

So are the women he's marrying already chosen in your mind ..will they be only from hp or will there be at least one dxd girl? Assuming you're still doing then 3 people thing mentioned in earlier chapters

Of course it's amazing! I don't even seem to mind too much that it'll take a whole year for the plot to actually start it's written well!

I like it so far! Definitely!!

It's alright although it feels like the words are spaced too close together and sometimes it says she for the main character but overall I can understand the first chapter

I really like this honestly although I do feel there's too much maria and not enough everyone else imo