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Nice start for a novel. Though it is a bit rough around the edges, it has the potential to be a really good read. 5 stars for encouragement and keep working hard!

Can't believe i went so long without posting a review but here it goes. The writing quality is good, as the author works with Editors who ensure the grammar is spot on and the phrases are easy to understand. The story development is linear, moving from one event to the next, with each new arc building on previous ones and developing the plot further. There is no nemesis or main antagonist, just conflicts based on interests, which make the story fluid and everchanging. The characters are well designed with complex features and personalities, although they all share the trait of "insanity" to some degree. Even with so many wives and women, you know who is who and are able to remember them all, due to their intricate development. The MC is not a simp nor a beta, and he is also decisive and mature. The novel is updated on the daily, hardly missing any days, and even in those cases, the next day there will be 2 chaps updated. The world itself is intricate and complex, making use of various mythologies and local lore, while also introducing various cultures and traditions. All in all, this is one of the best novels on WN if you can vibe with the genre.