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Amazing fic. Keep going. Would like more if you delve on lore and side characters a bit though.

The story is fine overall. But I would recommend author to change the first chapter as it was not a good impression overall. To me he felt like a entitled Chinese young master with all his complaints. The rest of the story is good. The character interactions are interesting and he is not a two dimensional character which is great. I would recommend the author to make his own original storylines and not follow the canon too much. Maybe explore magic which is inherent in db universe. You can also add interactions with other aliens that we had not seen otherwise in canon like tuffles. Add your own lore if you want to like him meeting yamoshi and other cool and og stuff. Instead of following the same cliches that everyone seems to follow. Give your own twist to evolution of Saiyan and including stuff from gt and xenoverse and all that good stuff to make it more interesting to us readers. These are just my suggestions. Peace.

I said "potentially" powerful. With the system and his angelic heritage. He would surpass og Dante eventually if author kept a consistent power development. As for quality. At least the characters are somewhat 3 dimensional. And grammar is readable. And not collect all girls as pokemon type fanfic. Which alone puts it above lots of novel in this platform. So yeah.

One of the better fics out there in web novel in my opinion. Not a masterpiece by any means but a very good read nonetheless. It is always interesting seeing some good character growth and development. Some people may not like how relatively weak the protagonist is. But for me who has seen cliche multiversal dark edge lords making their harem. It is breath of fresh air for me personally. I mean potentially he is going to be even more op in the future than the og Dante which quite good in my opinion. The only thing that I can say to people who maybe reading this review is: