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Replied to AmeTora

i apologize for how long it took me to respond!1) my book is about to continue being posted, but it might be a little different from before

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if it cant be put in a pocket im sad

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Solo Dominance

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oop

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Fantasy · xish101

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Replied to Jejeyy

oh? alright! username- dreamscraper

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Replied to ToufiqUlAlam

it gets confusing to even those outside the US

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Fantasy · ToufiqUlAlam

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this isnt realistic dialogue

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Fantasy · ToufiqUlAlam

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dont say tom do much. it gets repetitive

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Fantasy · ToufiqUlAlam

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*helpless

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Fantasy · ToufiqUlAlam

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writing your main character as 'hopeless' doesnt make people thjnk ur chsrscter is. show or describe. font tell

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Fantasy · ToufiqUlAlam

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use " anf not '. Readers won't knoe if its thoughts or actual words

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Fantasy · ToufiqUlAlam

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this is kinda better. but once sgain. you're judt explaining. its not going to hook anyone

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Fantasy · ToufiqUlAlam

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too many descriptdion make the story drag

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Fantasy · ToufiqUlAlam

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show dont tell

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