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Black_Reeper

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Author how about creating some new characters from ur imagination? There is only so little u can do with the game characters, night city is massive and u can make up ur own storylines, new gangs, small corps, random encounters, new female leads, new contractors to get jobs from…If u just use the game’s storyline and characters, it will get boring and unimaginative…Like get him in a phase where he’s working with corps from militich then working for gangs or mercenary, like he’s young and has to build up reputation…Of course in the end it’s still ur fanfic and this is only a suggestion…

AN - Regarding the first fight scene, I kept it short because the way Nooa is now, he wouldn't have lasted in a longer fight scene as magically dodging all the bullets seemed unreasonable. Taking advantage of the minimap and ambush seemed like the best way, as everyone pretty much seemed opposed to joining the Claws. I might have to bring Panam into the picture sooner as he needs some company, and coping in his room doesn't make for a good story.

Cyberpunk 2077: A flawed Timeline

Cyberpunk 2077: A flawed Timeline

Video Games · SmutNovel01

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Black_Reeper
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Cares about sister, Fanfic Ruined. Never has any fanfic survived this decision from authors…

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HOTD: Aerion Targaryen

HOTD: Aerion Targaryen

TV · MrGood23

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Pedophile

Looking at Sarah's clear eyes and the determination implicit in her mouth, Brian opened his mouth slightly but couldn't say even a single word. His heart seemed to be struck by lightning, making him breathless.

Surviving The Last Of Us World

Surviving The Last Of Us World

Video Games · kibishi718

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Commented

Fortunately the author is smart enough to remove that, other cyberpunk fanfics forget how broken this mechanic is….

Black_Reeper
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Without a cheat the author is right, cyberpunk fatality rate is crazy high if ur trying to be someone…

'Will breaching be as easy as it was in the game?' I thought before I pulled myself together. Aside from the fact that I had no intention of going against crews, gangs, and netrunners, the fact that I was in one of the harder worlds in fiction history was a concern.

Cyberpunk 2077: A flawed Timeline

Cyberpunk 2077: A flawed Timeline

Video Games · SmutNovel01

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Why are authors embarrassed to say their MCs are heroes, like don’t pretend to be a villain…

"These bastards, they are a cancer in this city. I'm no saint, I might even say I'm a bad person, but these people are like filthy worms." Madara murmured. 

The Witcher - Uchiha Madara!

The Witcher - Uchiha Madara!

Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague

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Why protect exactly?

He wanted to observe the lives of the people of this world more closely, understand more about this world, now that he had enough strength to protect it from almost any individual danger.

The Witcher - Uchiha Madara!

The Witcher - Uchiha Madara!

Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague

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To all new readers out there, here’s some wisdom, if u ever read a paragraph like this in any fanfic, it is ur signal to stop reading and save ur time…

With thoughts about the future, I did not notice the footsteps, or rather the stomping of feet, a small dark-haired girl with gray tear-stained eyes burst into my room. This baby is my beloved younger sister Arya, and someone should be afraid for their carcass because the one who made Arya cry is waiting for my punishment!

Dragon from Winterfell

Dragon from Winterfell

Book&Literature · Arcane_Eso

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Propably why he got executed and his house was destroyed…

My earnest attempts to alleviate boredom ceased when I heard footsteps distinct from the maester's—these were more assertive and weightier. By the sound, I knew it was Lord Stark, my father in all but blood, a man who risks everything for my safety, probably the only man in all Seven Kingdoms who truly embodies honor and is, simply put, a genuinely good person.

Dragon from Winterfell

Dragon from Winterfell

Book&Literature · Arcane_Eso

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Now imagine u getting a system with it, as if knowledge of the future wasn’t overpowered enough, these authors need to stop this propaganda about the dangers of the world when the MC knows the future…

Now imagine how it feels to be thrust into the World of Ice and Fire, a world with icy demons and zombies on one side, and fiery dragons with an army of barbarians capable of only looting, raping, and killing on the other. Why was I sent here?! I would never have agreed to this madness in my right mind! "Damn!"

Dragon from Winterfell

Dragon from Winterfell

Book&Literature · Arcane_Eso

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Or u throw her to the spiders and run away if need be…

"We leave together or we die together." Athias said back. He was having a far better time than her keeping up his wall of flames, but it was proving far more difficult to exert control at a distance.

Skyrim: A Reincarnator's Journey

Skyrim: A Reincarnator's Journey

Video Games · ISpyExp

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Note to author : “confronting” is a very weak and anticlimactic word when revealing who the target of revenge is, especially when u mention it a million times in the first 3 paragraphs of the first chapter…

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Replied to MorTemTK

Pretend Villain type

Hearing Manager Kim's claim, I couldn't help but chuckle. Indeed, except for a handful, all people were nothing but maggots, as far as I was concerned.

DxD: The Uncrowned Super Devil

DxD: The Uncrowned Super Devil

Anime & Comics · Pastlives

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Nah, she just couldn’t handle all that RIZZ…

What Ryuen didn't realize was that Yukio had orchestrated Rika's approach. The primary goal of the courage test wasn't really about proving bravery. In high school, such events are more about facilitating romantic opportunities.

Chaos in Classroom of the Elite: Class 1-C

Chaos in Classroom of the Elite: Class 1-C

Anime & Comics · Metarln

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Replied to TheSwordInTheNovel

It gets worse when u realise how overpowered maki is gonna be

Murmured Mute touching the wound. Due to the binding vow properties, and the fact that Maki can't use RCT. Mute cannot heal any wound on his body, that stemmed from Maki. Maki and Mute's bodies are linked, any damage done to Maki will also appear on Mute's body, that's why Mute protected Maki so ferociously. The only reason, the binding vow didn't affect, Mute while Maki fought Dagon on her lonesome. 

Zenin's Last Plan:

Zenin's Last Plan:

Anime & Comics · DaoistJIIvmp

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The glazing is so cringe

"That's why Yukio can be so confident, his defense is impeccable."

Chaos in Classroom of the Elite: Class 1-C

Chaos in Classroom of the Elite: Class 1-C

Anime & Comics · Metarln

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Why would he ever make that vow?

Murmured Mute touching the wound. Due to the binding vow properties, and the fact that Maki can't use RCT. Mute cannot heal any wound on his body, that stemmed from Maki. Maki and Mute's bodies are linked, any damage done to Maki will also appear on Mute's body, that's why Mute protected Maki so ferociously. The only reason, the binding vow didn't affect, Mute while Maki fought Dagon on her lonesome. 

Zenin's Last Plan:

Zenin's Last Plan:

Anime & Comics · DaoistJIIvmp

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Commented

Can we stop the glazing every two sentences…

"Exactly, we're fortunate to have Yukio-san and Ryuuen's reminder. Otherwise, getting caught off guard would be a real trouble."

Chaos in Classroom of the Elite: Class 1-C

Chaos in Classroom of the Elite: Class 1-C

Anime & Comics · Metarln

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