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so I'm getting confused Cain and kali r dragons and before they traveled to this new heaven they trained a lot in the dragon bloodline and transformations but now they never use that transformation y is that I think it's stupid there scales r extremely tough and they get a boost in strength from the transformation. r they ever going to make a full dragon transformation but that's what I want to c bc it seems like ur making them scared to use that ability when it's the best they have

so when are Cain and kali going to get there full dragon transformation we are all waiting for that amazing event

sorry but this story is kind of bs I mean it's good but the hole thing about Cain getting a new body and a dragon body is to be a dragon there hasn't been one thing that shows they r dragons in this story! nobody cares about the dragons pride nobody the hole point of being a dragon is to have a dragon form and they don't have the horns or the tail or the wings or anything of a dragon let alone breathing fire lol so what's the point of saying they r dragons when they r clearly humans?

what's taking so long to add chapters this is ridiculous

nvm she evolved again since she reached 8th stage my bad man, u just threw me a curve ball I wasn't ready for lol

what's with changing nadias race and now giving her wings ugh come on now got to keep up with ur own story. she's a moonlight dust wolf with 2 tails no wings

now I'm confused on this bc he clearly took the emporer trail now its saying he took the immortal trail what's with that

I will say this I'm a huge fan of fantasy novels and a lot of them all have there issues but all r good stories, but even tho English isn't ur main language uv done 85 percent better than 2 other fantasy novels I am currently reading so I give u props for that. I also give u props for the detail and the emotions that go into this story, I am a huge criticked when it comes to fantasy novels and I don't normally give compliments but I'm giving u one even tho I haven't read that far into the story uv done well with this one compliments to the author. I'm going to keep reading I hope I can keep enjoying it!

and what happend to getting more that one chapter a day this is taking to long to get chapters

come on man it's time to Amp Aditya up his strength isn't good enough anymore and since in ur story his main thing is to protect his people then make him as strong as possible so that he is feared by everyone even in the main continent

seriously man raise his cultivation to 5th order already is so stupid that he has to almost die with every big clash he has! the guy has the system for a reason make him use it, stop making him seem like some pathetic man that has no way out of his situation when he clearly has one! u make him seem like he doesn't care if he dies but he cares about the life of everyone else. he can't protect everyone if he isn't the strongest so make him be the strongest, u never should have made it so he could hold his cultivation back until he reached peak 5th order it makes the story boring and annoying. u should read the first demonic dragon story on this app and compare it to urs. I've read that story 3 times I don't even care to read this 1 more than once bc it's so annoying. a story like this is supposed to be thrilling not overly dramatic and stupidly annoying. nobody wants to read a story that has a obvious way to solve every issue but won't use it, and the only reason i keep reading it is bc I love dragons and cultivation stories so plz fix the story make it better than it is. oh and make him tell his family about the system already jeez ur already over 600 chapters and u still haven't done it.

I hope u r going really speed up Adityas cultivation bc he needs to reach peak 5th order. oh Idk if u already thought of these but I was thinking the other night about things that would be awesome for this story. 1 was where Aditya told all his family about the system and they told him to reach the highest level he can bc they have a feeling something big is coming. 2 I thought after he told his family about the system and that he can reach the peak he would tell his family to help him get the continent ready for the mana to rise bc he is going to break the laws of the 6 continents and reach peak 6th order bc the catastrophic events r going to start happening and he needs as much strength as he can muster. and 3rd and last idea I think it would be awesome if u make him tell his family about the system and they force him to reach peak 5th order in front of them to prove what he told them, then after he does that they decide to go back to the main continent and confront his father and mother to not only show them they made the biggest mistake ever but also to get to the bottom of y they sent him away the way they did, and once that's done they unite there empires to make the strongest force there is on the planet!

it's not that the arc Is going to slow its Aditya and his cultivation level that's bothering raise him to the peak fast plz

hey come on when r u going to make him advance his cultivation this is ridiculous, r u trying to make us hate this story it's a good one but stupid! he had every chance to win every battle without issue but u make him dumb and self conscious about leveling up which causes him to almost die all the time. this is getting boring and extremely annoying and aggrevating. we want to see him reach peak 5th stage or higher and just dominate

I'm just gonna say it I love this story the father son banter and everything that goes with that family is awesome. I hope this story goes on for a lot longer but I wonder how the rest of the wives abaddon has will become God's as well or his mother or daughters!