DaoistEcAsfF - Profile

All relationships don't make any sense and the MC becomes an idiot when it comes to women, the limit was him apologizing to Fiona without him having done anything wrong, it leaves an unpleasant and ridiculous feeling, that was the limit.

I decided to take another look, the worst idea is the AI the author is using just gets weirder and the main character is more of an asshole.

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Written by AI, many pronoun and grammar errors, and terribly flowery and unnecessary writing, making it boring and prolonging scenes unnecessarily.

Another story with an idiotic MC driven by emotions in a stupid way that is just ridiculous and causes even more problems, apart from the lack of objectives, it's not so bad in the beginning but the fact that he is led by the other characters is unbearable, sometimes even not wanting anymore not having enough decision to just do what he wants, sad and disgusting character.

The most confusing thing with the most conflicting information of events I've ever read, and the way it's written it's clearly an AI that was drunk for sure.

A good story if you took away Mc's interaction with the female characters, it's strange and uncomfortable, especially with the unpleasant black widow they have, their friendship with the other characters is strange and full of complicated relationships, just unpleasant.

Boring writing, lots of beautiful words but useless sometimes entire sentences like that, a character who should be a scientist from a superior race behaves like a child with anger problems, until the current chapter we have an unpleasant protagonist and a story that doesn't progress because it stays beating around the bush with words that only prolong things.

Bizarre . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

Use of gpt chat, and the female characters each have unpleasant personalities and actions and the protagonist still continues interacting with them, just disgusting

It would be a good story without the older sister, but with her it is unbearable to read.Disappointing because it's good writing and the author does well in everything else, but it was completely destroyed by it.

Using Lucifer in this story is ridiculous, there's nothing about Lucifer there and Maze is even worse there are other characters and damn Hermione tricking him into sleeping is ridiculous he's Lucifer bro, create an original character for this attempted story

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Retarded protagonist, with ridiculous interactions with female characters.- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -