The writer still needs some language improvements. Other than that, everything is fine. The characters are good, the world is vast and well-crafted, and the plot is good.
Fantasy · CAESAR20
Good chapter
ch 20 DEVIL BEAR
Apparently this is your first novel and it's amazing how good you are at what you do and the plot seems so well done The main character also seems full of mystery
I love this novel
ch 18 THE CHANGE(2)
Nice chapter
ch 11 THE LEGACY
I loved the novel from its first chapters. I hope it continues at the same pace until now. The novel is wonderful and its details are good. I hope it does not destroy it like other novels.
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The writer still needs some language improvements. Other than that, everything is fine. The characters are good, the world is vast and well-crafted, and the plot is good.
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Fantasy · CAESAR20