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What about next chapters

No mention of prize . At least it should have mentioned .

translation is worse ( full frame , children of heaven )these are common mistakes in 2-3 paragraphs . I can't read even read it properly . It doesn't make sense .

Scale is bigger here . It's common to have the same names because all of us have the same watchlists( references) i.e.Godfather , magic systems , Academy's , clubs , dungeons , hunters etc.

Glad to have you back .

Did he change his writing style after the first few cringey chapters . It's completely different from early chapters . Clear and concise i like it .

Descriptions are too long and complex . you can describe authority , beauty and other features in simple words . Does he need this extravagant designs and decoration on the death day bro . when you said it is one of the richest family , we will already have a definite imagination don't overthrow on the faces of readers .

Bro , why is he describing every moment . it is unnecessary trouble for readers . we can't even differentiate between dialogues and the backscript . why does this child act as a fully grown adult , he was still a college student ( before reincarnation ) . Bro if you say it's because of intelligence stat , it is an excuse .