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Did you get that for somewhere? Or is it common in your country? I’ve heard of a telegraphed punch but never a telephone punch. Your previous description of “as if receiving a phone call” made me lol.
The fatty shouted as he laughed maniacally. He dashed forward and sent a punch toward my face. It was a simple telephone punch that even a kid could throw.
Taming my Monster Girl Harem from Scratch
Fantasy · SeraphWedd
Ugh! I was hoping Ren would show up at the door!
Lost in contemplation, Chris wondered aloud, "I wonder what he's doing right now," as he savored the last bite of his cookie. His musings were interrupted by a scolding from Rose, who had been so engrossed in their conversation that she had forgotten to eat.
No More Pain For This Villain.
Fantasy · Satan03
Oh thank goodness.
Hopping on Blaze's back after he transformed into his Winged Pardus form, we left the platform behind and ascended into the sky. As we soared through the air, I channeled mana into him to sustain our flight. We engaged in light conversation along the way, enjoying the freedom and exhilaration of flying above the world below.
No More Pain For This Villain.
Fantasy · Satan03
Oh come on, just get home then go to the academy.
'Let's go,' I declared. I couldn't rest until I investigated this enigma, especially after the frustrations of the dungeon city.
No More Pain For This Villain.
Fantasy · Satan03
These POV changes are getting annoying. Too many, too frequent.
[Somewhere Else.]
No More Pain For This Villain.
Fantasy · Satan03
You just said in his dungeon progress that hue had reached the 3rd floor yet. Is this a time skip?
"It's...big."The entrance to the fourth floor of the dungeon was unlike anything I had encountered before. It was a massive, towering archway carved from ancient stone, adorned with intricate engravings that depicted scenes of chaos and destruction. The archway stood as a foreboding gateway, its dark and ominous presence sending shivers down my spine.
No More Pain For This Villain.
Fantasy · Satan03
She’s right in front of you!
"Don't worry, if she's around, I'll find her." He said and looked at the surroundings.
Progenitor Vampire: I Have Many Skills!
Fantasy · Deltta
Isla is C rank, not B rank.
"No one was told because that would cause a big stir, but whoever could complete this mission would be upgraded one rank. Since you are all B-Rank, you will now be upgraded to A-Rank." He said.
Progenitor Vampire: I Have Many Skills!
Fantasy · Deltta
Who is Tang Yin?!
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Progenitor Vampire: I Have Many Skills!
Fantasy · Deltta
Why didn’t he include Larka in this?
Standing slightly shorter than himself, the man must be the son of his grandparents, and he would shortly get confirmation of his guess when the man held out his hand with a bright smile while introducing himself, ''I'm Finnian Silverthrone, Sia's and Henry's little brother and your coolest uncle.''
A Journey That Changed The World.
Fantasy · NegansPalace
Author. I need to talk to you over here, in this dark alley, just us. I promise I just want to talk.
The cat girl's gaze fell to the ground as she replied softly, "I needed to cleanse my system to regulate my moonblood cycle. I'm not pregnant, Arch."
A Journey That Changed The World.
Fantasy · NegansPalace
I remembered.
When asked, everyone politely declined because they wanted to rest after the fights or study some new spells they found in the library. With a shrug, he contacted Fianna to see if she was free.
A Journey That Changed The World.
Fantasy · NegansPalace
I misread and confused the Duchess with the older women living in the new church city.
''Let's get going,'' Archer spoke after examining the Duchess.
A Journey That Changed The World.
Fantasy · NegansPalace
Wait is she the Everrose girl?! When did she get into the new church city and settle in?!
''Let's get going,'' Archer spoke after examining the Duchess.
A Journey That Changed The World.
Fantasy · NegansPalace
Who is Fianna?! Am I forgetting something here?!
When asked, everyone politely declined because they wanted to rest after the fights or study some new spells they found in the library. With a shrug, he contacted Fianna to see if she was free.
A Journey That Changed The World.
Fantasy · NegansPalace
First and third*
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A Journey That Changed The World.
Fantasy · NegansPalace
If you’re passionate about it, I recommend you write it slowly while keeping up with your current novel. Wait to release it until this one is close to finishing. That way, you can transition into your new novel smoothly and hopefully keep your revenue steady. You also might be able to get a bunch of reader from this novel to transition into the new novel too. For example, overlap the last 50 chapters of this novel with the first 50 chapters of the new novel. I’m just a reader though, so take what I say with heaps of salt lol.
[If there are any mistakes, point them out, and I'll edit it. Thanks - Would anyone be interested in a dark British zombie novel? Let me know, and I'll release the chapters I've written so far]
A Journey That Changed The World.
Fantasy · NegansPalace
“I wana be, the very best. Like no one ever was.” Dun dun du dun.
I had a dream. It was to become the strongest in the whole world. To achieve this, I did all I could to make myself stronger. However, no matter how much training I do, no matter how many essence crystals I consume, I still remained weak.
Taming my Monster Girl Harem from Scratch
Fantasy · SeraphWedd