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  • Reincarnated Into A Dead Woman's Body In Another World

    Reincarnated Into A Dead Woman's Body In Another World

    Fantasy ADVENTURE REINCARNATION MAGIC MYSTERY DARK TRANSMIGRATION ISEKAI YURI LIGHTNOVEL SINGLEFEMALELEAD

    4.97

    "CRASH!" the last sound he heard; the last image being the smile of his friends. Jotou Howllett, a twenty-one year old nobody who finds little to no purpose in his life, wants to be a freelancer to make it big whilst trying to avoid education. He spends his last day of freedom with his friends before he's forced by his parents to attend college. That last day became his true last day as a white light flashed and he opened his eyes in a coffin, suffocating. He, now she, found herself to be in the body of a woman who had recently passed away. Jotou comes to realize that she's no longer in her world and now is in some sort of fantasy world. The rampant problems in this world soon find themselves surrounding Jotou, from the magics to the monsters to the wars between kingdoms and cities. Jotou sets out to uncover how she got here, why is she here, is she stuck here? Alongside the companions she finds in her way. _ Join the Discord Community for extra info about spells, magic, the world, announcements and more! : https://discord.gg/NPxPJZKamz _ Here's the map of the world!: https://imgur.com/a/krMRCCX Follow along on her journey through this new world, an isekai anime style story written the way I would love to read myself. It's set in an industrial revolution-esque era with magics and inconsistent technologies as a result. From slice of life moments to dark moments; comedy, fantasy, darkness, romance, mystery and reincarnation all rolled up into one adventure and I do hope anyone reading this has fun and enjoys the journey that's crafted! I intend to go by arcs and chapters much like a light novel. If you would like to give me any feedback about my writing or just want to appreciate my work, you can always leave a comment, a review or a power stone or leave feedback in the Discord! Any support is appreciated. My Links: Email: eletro104@gmail.com Reddit: u/Eletro_101 Twitter: @eletro101 Discord Community for this Book: https://discord.gg/NPxPJZKamz

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  • Falling for the Bad Boy in the Reverse Harem Game [BL]

    Falling for the Bad Boy in the Reverse Harem Game [BL]

    LGBT+ R18 SYSTEM COMEDY SUPERPOWERS ISEKAI BL YAOI LOVETRIANGLE BADBOY SHOWBIZ

    4.74

    The debuting singer Takeda Haruki would never believe he’d fall for a drawing. And it's a drawing of a guy out of all things! But when he finds himself dragged into a girl's harem game, Haruki soon finds out the drawing doesn't just live on paper and in his dreams, but in reality too! And he's still just! As! Attractive!Six handsome men wake up inside an experimental girl’s otome game, against their will.They’ll discover leaving is much harder than they think, but they have no intention of following the game rules!"Down with the system! We're on strike!"It's probably the only escape plan ever that involves so many alpha men pretending to be gay. But are they really pretending? Can fake love become real? And is that a love triangle in the distance?Find out now! Unlock the secret route of insanity, smut, and Haruki's true ending!COMPLETED NOVEL*****SMUT SCENES!SILLY AND LIGHT-HEARTED NOVEL, NOT ANGSTY!*****Hello, it's my first story! Please support this novel with votes and reviews. English is not my first language, feedback is appreciated!Se você lê em Português, procure no site por 'Crush pelo Bad Boy do Otome'.HinataPerolada

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  • New World New Life

    New World New Life

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE SYSTEM MAGIC TRANSMIGRATION SHAPESHIFTER

    4.6

    What would you do if you woke up in a forest with no memories?Would you cower in fear, or explore the strange new world?Join Vyrena on her journey through Gaeia as she tries to figure out her mysterious past! With the voice in her head named Dotty, she will make friends, enemies, gain new powers and become the greatest warrior she could ever be!Will she find out who she was before? What will the new world bring? Join her journey and find out! Will she find a dash of romance along the way? She just might!_____________________________________________________________"Where am I?" Vyrena asked herself.The girl tried to move her body, but all of her muscles and bones ached. Her throat was as dry as the desert, she needed water. In the near distance, Vyrena could hear the sound of moving water. Gathering all of her strength, she crawled inch by inch towards the water source.Upon reaching the riverbank, she quenched her thirst greedily. It tasted clear and refreshing, a good sign. She could feel the dirt and grime that covered her entire body. Unable to bear it anymore, Vyrena dunked herself into the water.The cool refreshing feel of the river water jolted her senses. As she emerged from the water, she could finally open her eyes and take in her surroundings.-How did I end up here?- she thought to herself.She tried to remember what she could. Memories flashed through her mind.- I died -The realisation shocked her to the core. Her eyes were wide open. Recalling the details made her head spin.She recalled drinking a substance and laying down in her bed. A familiar hand held onto hers, his words echoed in her mind.-I'm here for you. I'm here for you.-But as soon as that memory faded, new memories from the host body bombarded her. When the recollection of memories was complete, a voice popped up in her mind._____________________________________________________________I hope you enjoy the story! If you love it or maybe not, give me some feedback in the comments or in a review! All feedback will be greatly appreciated~As of 20th June 2021, is completed, thank you for everyones' support. I will likely write a sequel in the future. PS: The current cover was commissioned from the amazing @balqizu on Instagram! Thank you so much for bringing them to life! T^T Join my discord server: https://discord.gg/hYdy6uUCome chat with me on Discord at ValestriaMoon#9724!A huge thank you to everyone who supported me in posting my novel XD you know who you are~

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  • Awakened As A Dungeon Core?

    Awakened As A Dungeon Core?

    4.12

    What happens when a normal man awakens in a world of magic and monsters? What if he awakens as a gemstone that can't move, eat, or communicate but is somehow alive? What happens when this stone learns to cast magic and create rooms, to bring life to monsters of its own and defend itself from invaders? This is the story of that mans journey from a small one room tunnel to a magnificent challenge to the universe. Chapters range from 1k-1.5k words usually! First time writing this type of novel but always wanted to try so any feedback helps! Also below is my patreon! Most things to influence my novel are free but by subscribing to it you help me afford more time to write instead of working two jobs as well as to commission artists to turn my monsters and manic dream creatures into reality! https://patreon.com/user?u=71062598

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  • Hot Coffee

    Hot Coffee

    Urban R18 CEO POSSESSIVE FAMILY ABANDONED RICHFAMILY

    4.78

    Have you ever been involved with your boss? Are you clumsy? Have you ever poured Hot Coffee in you're boss? If you answered "Yes" to atleast (2) two of these questions then you might be able to relate to our Female Lead, Marianna Catalina Rodriguez. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Marianna had embarked on a new journey in life working for the young Mr. Martinez who is notoriously known for his hot temper. Although Mr. Martinez's temper is hot do you know what is more hot? Thats right the hot coffee spilled all over him on the first day on Ms. Rodriguez's employment. But what is this? She isn't fired but promoted? What could possibly be the reason? A change of heart or just the main motive of getting in her pants? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ There is only one way to find out and its by following along with the story of Marianna and Mr. Martinez.All work of fiction. Any real life events and people resemblance are all of pure coincidence. Leave comments and give feedback if you like. You can also follow me on ig. Ig and discord are both on my profile. Thank you for giving my story a chance and happy reading.•||☆2nd book of this series☆||•

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  • My Last Apocalypse

    My Last Apocalypse

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE REINCARNATION MYSTERY CULTIVATION DARK SURVIVAL GENIUS APOCALYPSE RIGHTEOUS

    I can't explain why or how this cycle repeats for me. Yet, what I do understand is each time I die, I return to the starting point, a zombie apocalypse, and continue my journey anew. In my first apocalypse, I overlooked the creeping signs of doom until overrun by zombies in my flat, where I perished in sheer terror. The second attempt to alert others of the impending chaos fell on deaf ears; labelled a lunatic, I fled the city, only to succumb to starvation and exposure alone in the wild. By the third go, I sought safety in wealth, collecting vast supplies, yet fell victim to a brutal gang. Now, understanding the key—precise foresight, survival skills, strict secrecy, and solitude—I see the purpose in reliving this collapse. This time, failure is not an option. This time, I will survive and outlive the apocalypse. *** [UPDATED DAILY] Welcome to my novel! This marks my debut work on WebNovel. I hope you enjoy it, and I always welcome your feedback.

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  • Becoming a Monster

    Becoming a Monster

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE R18 SYSTEM MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG DARK SURVIVAL APOCALYPSE EVOLUTION

    3.57

    No one knew that the stories they read of fantasy creatures and legends would now become their source of hell. Follow Noah during humans biggest and maybe last crisis yet as he finally found a reason to live which may also leave him losing his humanity. Feedback is definitely appreciated, good or bad, lets make the story good together. I will like to note that the main character isn’t completely ruthless like some of you may want. There’s a lot of stories out there with ruthless, bloodthirsty, cold hearted main characters so if that’s what your interest in then I’m sorry to disappoint you.

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  • reincarnated as deku with feedback

    reincarnated as deku with feedback

    Akira ido is reincarnated as deku with feedbacks powers this is my first fanfiction so give feedback please

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  • The Mischievous Maiden & The Sleeping Prince

    The Mischievous Maiden & The Sleeping Prince

    History REINCARNATION MYSTERY DARK TRAGEDY HISTORICAL ROYALFAMILY LOVETRIANGLE PRINCESS FORBIDDENLOVE

    4.77

    A runaway maiden finds herself entangled in a tale of horror when she saves the Bride of a prince from a Haunted Castle. --- WARNING: HEAVY SUPERNATURAL ELEMENTS, GORE, DISTURBING THEMES, SLOW-BURN ROMANCE, RICH-IN-STORY NOVEL! I hope you like this story. If you wish, please support this tale by voting, rating, and commenting. Your feedback on typos or bad grammar is welcomed and appreciated.

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  • Only I Can See The End

    Only I Can See The End

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE SYSTEM MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG OVERPOWERED TRANSMIGRATION VILLAIN APOCALYPSE

    4.67

    Mikey has been having dreams (nightmares) every night, for the past ten years. His dreams tread the realm beyond the ordinary, showing Dungeons, Monsters, magic-like occurrences, and the literal end of the world. But, what happens when the dreamer wakes up, only to find out that the things he has been seeing in these nightmares have started to appear in reality? Now faced with an inevitable fate that draws closer, Mikey must do all he can to ensure the grim future he witnessed doesn’t occur. For the sake of himself, and everyone he grows to care about, he must. “… Win or die trying!” * * * NOTE: While there is a Villain tag, the Novel doesn't start off with the MC being a morally bad person. Please keep that in mind as you read. Also, I'd really appreciate feedback from you readers. I'll take what I can get. Thanks

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  • Hundredfold Feedback System: The Emperor and his invincible wifes!

    Hundredfold Feedback System: The Emperor and his invincible wifes!

    Fantasy ROMANCE R18 SYSTEM HAREM CULTIVATION VILLAIN

    [No Virgin+Villain protagonist+Strong Wife+Emperor+Low-Key] Standing on top of the Palace of Heaven overlooking all living beings his hand behind his back with severals powerful empress next to him Jin Yi said softly: "Low-key is prosperity this is my Dao!"(The image does not belong to me and if there is a problem I will not hesitate to remove it.)

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  • Ghost Rider in Twilight/TVD/TO

    Ghost Rider in Twilight/TVD/TO

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE REINCARNATION COMEDY HAREM OVERPOWERED TWILIGHT GHOST HUNT

    3.56

    Shiva was a 28-year-old teenager who died in a car crash and was reborn with the power of Ghost Rider in the Twilight and TVD (The Vampire Diaries) world. . . . Arthur's Note: My grammar may not be the best, but I'm working on improving it. I don't own any of the characters, only my original character (OC). I would appreciate feedback and support if you enjoy the story. I will be updating it three to four days a week.

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  • Lycan's Sin

    Lycan's Sin

    Fantasy R18 SYSTEM MAGIC CULTIVATION WEREWOLF POWERFULCOUPLE SEDUCTIVE FORBIDDENLOVE GETTINGBACKTOGETHER WOMENSWORLD

    A powerful tale of love and vengeance. When the person who you have sworn to kill turns out to be your lover. It's hard to forgive when wounds run so deep. You can't help when love runs Its course after years of hate. Will they give in to their desires or be the enemies the fate had made them be. I need feedback guys good or bad. You can bash me on my grammar and spelling mistakes so I may fix it Love and hugs Author

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  • New Life as a Futanari Tentacle Girl

    New Life as a Futanari Tentacle Girl

    Fantasy REINCARNATION R18 SYSTEM MAGIC ISEKAI NONHUMAN YURI

    4.66

    This will be the first time writing something. I'm going to take all genres I like and try force them together. The MC gets reincarnated into a world of swords and magic. Start of the novel will be character and setting introduction, and later MC will travel around. R18 chapters will naturally come later... nevermind, the whole story is R18. First few chapters are just her building her 'character'. [R18 Tags] Harem | NSFW | Domination | Threesome | Foursome | Tentacle | Futa on Female | Female on Futa | Futanari | Incest | Anal | Sex | Choking | Humiliation | Lolicon Dis*cord https://disc*rd.gg/QPK42eMnUw replace the * with a o I am open to feedback and hope you enjoy.

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  • Saranghae My Superstar

    Saranghae My Superstar

    Urban ROMANCE COMEDY SUPERSTAR

    5

    Hana Subekti, seorang mahasiswi Indonesia yang mendapat beasiswa untuk kuliah di Korea selatan. K-Art University menjadi kampus tempat ia menimba ilmu. Namun, suatu hal terjadi dan membuatnya harus menjadi seorang karyawan magang sebagai asissten penanggung jawab artis di sebuah agensi. Hal ini membuatnya harus berhubungan dengan seorang aktor sekaligus penyanyi yang sangat terkenal di Korea, Kang Junhyuk. Artis asuhan agensi tempat Hana bekerja yang ternyata punya sifat jelek di balik gemerlapnya panggung hiburan yang membesarkan namanya. Kang Junhyuk membenci Hana dari awal mereka bertemu. Bagaimana Hana dan hatinya ketika di benci oleh orang yang juga ia kagumi saat berada di televisi? Mampukah Hana menjungkir balikkan dunia Junhyuk? ikutin terus yuk.... Please tinggalkan komen dan review kalian setelah baca yaa... karena feedback dari kalian sangat berarti... Mari nge-halu bersama fufufu

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  • Rubik’s Man: I’m Rich & You’re Dead

    Rubik’s Man: I’m Rich & You’re Dead

    Action ACTION ROMANCE R18 SYSTEM MAGIC HAREM VILLAIN WEREWOLF KILLER URBAN

    Smoke Pac, a top gangster of Clown City fell to the lower rung of the criminal ladder and became a sewage rat left for dead. He was betrayed and brutally killed by his former mafia associates. During his death, he accidentally awakened the mysterious powers of the Rubik's Cube System. With his new lease on life and newfound powers, he vowed to regain his title as number one Crime Lord of Clown City while relishing in his sweet-sweet revenge. Authors Note: Feel free to share your feedback, drop a comment, leave a review and big thanks to everyone who supports this story. Here are my other books on Webnovel: 1. The Jamaican Blur: Island Superheroes! [ https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-jamaican-blur-island-superheroes!_27279642105011205 ] AuthorsDread Contacts: https://linktr.ee/authorsdread https://www.patreon.com/AuthorsDread Twitter: https://twitter.com/Authors_Dread Discord: https://discord.gg/MMqjgX4dRd

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  • this is my first story so please feel free to give me some feedback

    this is my first story so please feel free to give me some feedback

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  • My New Marvel Life

    My New Marvel Life

    Action ACTION REINCARNATION MARVEL

    3.67

    Seth McCauley, a "Marvel" nerd that was an ordinary person who hadn't done anything other than just live his life, never doing anything to make him stand out is given a chance to finally do something amazing. He is reincarnated in the MCU with all of his favorite characters with three wishes to change his fate and finally be someone that the world will remember forever NOTICE: I do not own Marvel or any of it's elements only the MC and my fanfic elements P.S. This is my first time writing a novel so I'd appreciate some feedback to how I can make it better

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  • Middle Child Syndrome

    Middle Child Syndrome

    Urban R18 WEAKTOSTRONG BEAUTY CEO POSSESSIVE POWERFULCOUPLE YURI LOVETRIANGLE MAFIA ALPHA

    _ _ _ _ MXFXF relationship. Please read the note. Please add it to the collection then and support me. All feedback will be appreciated She was not the heiress, the eldest, or the youngest. She just existed in the family, keeping her head down and letting herself wash away until she could leave. "I tried standing out, staying quiet, and even voicing my thoughts. But no matter what I do, I am never acknowledged. Does my existence even matter? After all, it's not like anyone in this family even likes me." Rika Goodwill was the shame of her family. Born the middle 'beta' child of a prominent Alpha-Omega couple, it was natural for her to be neglected compared to her perfect Alpha brother and sweet Omega sister. Her situation outside of her family was no better. People avoided her because of her mafia family and judged her nature without a second thought. Her only friends were the 'sweetheart couple of the century'. But Rika had somehow become a third wheel between their bickering and frequent breakups. Over the course of her 17-year-old life, Rika had come to accept her fate and move on. After all, no amount of complaining would ever change her situation of being a third wheel. Collage was supposed to be her big break. It was supposed to be the time Rika had for herself, where she could feel like herself, so she applied for a place where no one knew her. This was supposed to be her lucky break! Rika was supposed to get away from her worsening life. But neither her family nor her 'friends' were ready to let her go, and it did not take long for her peaceful life to turn sour. ____________ This story will have a straight pairing as well as Yuri and is an omegaverse as well. Female Alphas are Futas. If it's not your cup of tea, leave before you enter. Leave a lot of feedback for me

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  • My Clinic In Another World

    My Clinic In Another World

    Fantasy ADVENTURE SYSTEM MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG CULTIVATION TRANSMIGRATION SLICEOFLIFE ISEKAI KINGDOMBUILDING LEVELUP

    4.72

    Seo Jun, a devoted surgeon, and devoted otaku meets an untimely demise at the hands of a colleague. However, his journey doesn't end there. Through a twist of fate orchestrated by a mysterious reaper, he's reborn as Han, a beggar, in a fantastical world.Armed with the unique [Clinic System] gift, Han embraces a new life, establishing a clinic amidst a war-torn city. But survival isn't just about medicine; Han must navigate his introverted nature and love for money while aiding the wounded. In a realm where magic and turmoil intertwine, can Han find solace and purpose?Join Han as he unravels the mysteries of his transmigration and strives to heal more than just physical wounds in "Clinic In Another World."----Updating Everyday!Please give me feedback, so I can improve my story as it continues.If you have questions, anything related to the setting of this story. Please ask me, this way I can develop my story as well.This story is a participant of the WSA 2024 contest. I would be thankful If you guys support me.

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