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" But, he said that you two have been together for almost ten years. I can't help but believe him. After all, we've only known each other for three years…" Ye Zi was also quite shocked when she heard this story. No wonder the relationship between father and son was so fractured. Ji Anlin's childhood was like this. Not only did she feel pity for him, but she also blamed the uncle for being too promiscuous back then. However, it seemed that his revenge had already begun. "Him? Who?" Gu Yiqing did not understand "Ji Anlin." "He might have misunderstood. He thought that the reason why I never returned home was because of He Tingting. It has only been two years since we met and fell in love. In these two years, I have indeed given my feelings." She paused and looked at Ye 'zi's expression. She knew that this incident had dealt a huge blow to her. " I don't deny that I noticed you because of He Tingting," Gu Yiqing said gently." But, Xiao Yezi, you have to understand that I, Gu Yiqing, will never like someone because of another person." Being together with you is definitely not to replace me as her. Xiao Yezi, you are unique. How can you be her shadow?" Gu Yiqing said sincerely. Ye 'zi was very outstanding. Ye 'zi just looked at Gu Yiqing and didn't say anything. "Do you really not trust me or have no confidence in yourself?" Gu Yiqing asked again. You're the only girl I, Gu Yiqing, want to cherish after wandering for most of my life. You don't even know how important you are to me, Xiao Yezi." For the first time, she saw a sense of powerlessness in his eyes. All along, his deep eyes had always been a mystery to her. Had she made him powerless? Leaf lowered her head." I'm sorry, Uncle. I just don't believe in myself." " I've been in a relationship before. When we broke up, he said that he was with me because I looked like someone else." This was the first time Ye 'zi talked about her feelings in front of Gu Yiqing. Although it was a little ambiguous, she hoped that he would understand. "Ye 'zi, you're a good girl! It's precisely because he didn't cherish you that I met you, but you can't lose confidence in yourself because of this. You're really charming and outstanding." She was so outstanding that he sometimes felt ashamed of himself, but she never knew her charm. Her innocent appearance had touched the hearts of countless men. She thought for a moment and said solemnly," I don't like you. I love you. Little Yezi, I love you!" Ye 'zi's heart tightened. He told her that he loved her. This was the first time Gu Yiqing had mentioned his love to her. She also wanted to mention those three words to him, but she couldn't say it no matter how hard she tried. "You don't call me Gu Yiqing anymore?" Gu Yiqing teased her on the surface, but he could not help but feel disappointed in his heart. In the end, she could not repay his love. "However, you look quite cute when you call me by my name angrily." Ye Zi pouted in displeasure. He actually dared to mock him. She thought of another question." Why did you ask me if He Queque told me? Does she know about you?" Gu Yiqing looked at Ye Zi, who had a puzzled expression on her face. He knew that if he didn't clarify this matter, she would definitely let her imagination run wild again, so he had to go all out. He Tingting is your mother's sister." " Ah???" Ye Zi widened her eyes. If that was the case, then He Tingting would be her aunt. Then, Gu Yiqing…Why was there something wrong with their relationship? "Uncle, what are you doing?" Thinking of this, Leaf stood up and shouted angrily. This didn't seem to be Uncle's fault. This Little Yezi was really spoiled. Gu Yiqing lowered his head as if he had done something wrong. When he first found out about this relationship, he was also very surprised and did not intend to tell Ye 'zi. "I only found out later." Gu Yiqing explained carefully. " Forget it." Ye Zi looked around at the waiters who were whispering to each other. She felt a little awkward. Things had already come to this point. She sat down and did not say anything. "At that time, He Tingting often mentioned her second sister, your mother. He Tingting admired her. She even often showed me photos of your family of three. At that time, in order to be with your father, your mother resolutely cut ties with the He family. He Tingting secretly contacted her. Sometimes, she went to your house and often mentioned you to me when she came back. She praised you for being smart and cute. You were about five or six years old at that time." At the mention of this, Gu Yiqing also felt a little incredulous. At that time, how could he have thought that he would be involved with that child who was only a few years old? Life was really strange. "Later, after I met you in England, I met your mother and recognized her. I told her about the past. She and I decided not to tell you about this because we were afraid that you would feel awkward." Leaf's expression was indeed a little awkward. "Back then, she was able to break up with her family for her father. Why did she abandon our father-daughter world?