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Please help me change this sentence. Don't change the meaning, but read it more fluently!

Please help me change this sentence. Don't change the meaning, but read it more fluently!

2025-03-06 10:08
The bustling streets gradually faded away, and as usual, they were suffering from the invasion of the night after the afterglow. It was at a certain corner of the street, a place that had no chance of being a gorgeous street, that an amazing scene was being played out.
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Is this destiny?

Is this destiny?

Sarah Hill is an introvert who does not want to attract attention. Other than mad coding skills, Sarah knows how to throw a punch. She believes that her biggest problem is the existence of the hacker Omega and her world flips upside-down when the most popular guy on campus approaches her. What does he want? Why her? (Ah, Sarah, that is only the beginning.) JoAnna Hill easily makes friends with her bubbly personality. Some call her a mad scientist, but she prefers ‘Dr. Hill’, because that is what she is. JoAnna is an excellent markswoman who can snipe out any target and she is wondering if her prince charming will ever come. Sophia Hill is the voice of reason, their pillar of support. She is a confident CEO who knows how to get what she wants. Sophia’s degree in law combined with amazing capabilities to analyze the situation and plan ahead make her the perfect strategist (to achieve a goal without ending up in jail). This is a story of three Hill sisters who are navigating through challenges while they uncover the complicated story behind their maternal side of the family. And their father is not a simple man either. Every sister is different, and so are their relationships. They all have in common: trust and belief that if they work together, anything is possible. Mature content! 18+ ***SPOILER? - START *** The story starts with a focus on the youngest sister (Sarah). After about 100 chapters, the oldest sister (Sophia) gets in the romantic spotlight. JoAnna finds herself pulled into romance last, at about 200 chapter mark. ***SPOILER? - END *** Excerpt from the novel... "Do you believe in destiny?", Sarah broke the silence. "Destiny?" Aiden didn't expect such a question. "Yes. The thing that is meant to happen, and there is nothing you can do to prevent it. And when it does happen, everything feels right." "Why would you ask me such a thing?" "Until a few weeks ago I would say that there is no such thing as destiny. That we are all masters of our lives and that everything depends on our actions, or lack of it. But I can't help but wonder: why did I not push you away? ... Why does it feel like everything will be OK as long as we are together? ... You are a piece of me that I never knew was missing. Is this destiny?" "Mmm... if that is destiny, then I approve it.", Aiden lightly kissed Sarah's shoulder and rested his chin on it. --- 1st WARNING!!! Contains descriptions of intimate scenes. If you are not comfortable with that, don’t read it! --- 2nd WARNING!!! This is my first novel! :) --- ***** I own the cover. ***** Check out my other novels: * "Accident Prone" * "Amara - Reunion" * "The Alpha's Bride" * "The Supreme Alpha"
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Help me change my sentence!

Hello, I'm a fan of online literature. May I ask what wrong sentence do you need me to correct?

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2024-09-18 20:46

Change the wrong sentence, where to change

Your question isn't clear enough, so I can't know which sentence you need to change. Please provide more specific questions or sentences so that I can help you better.

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2024-09-20 14:18

Please help me change a Mandarin article into a Cantonese speech.

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2025-03-10 03:36

I like to read " Please Don't Force Me to Change Clothes ". Are there any other books that I can recommend?

There were novels similar to "Please Don't Force Me to Change Clothes" 1:"Writing a Diary in Entertainment, Becoming a Top Student?" Author: Sky Light 2."Rebirth 08: The Martial God from the Pugilist." Author: Feng Guang He Chen 3."Longevity Begins from the Forbidden Technique." Author: Super Little Erha The following is a detailed introduction of these novels: 1:"Writing a Diary in Entertainment, Becoming a Top Student?" "Did I transmigrate? 2015 again! You must be joking!" "I graduated from a film school!" "I want to record too. There's actually a reward for recording?" "I'm rich!" He did it four times in one go. Her beautiful eyes widened. What was going on? What a joke! <<REBIRTH 08: The Martial God from the Pugilist>>: Deep Space Mechs roam the universe, Abyss Gods and Demons whisper. In this interstellar era where new psionic powers clashed with old martial arts, where gods and devils lurked in the abyss and opened up the world, Lu Biping brought along a class panel and stumbled back to this familiar yet unfamiliar 08. "[Overclock] Lv. 1 (Active). Effect: In a short period of time, the person learning will double their thinking speed and slightly increase their brainpower. They will be able to devote themselves to the target." "[Heaven Rewards Hard Work] Lv. 1 (Passive). Effect: No pain, no gain. Hard work will definitely be rewarded. (Note: This skill is a passive skill. At this stage, its special effects include but are not limited to ignoring any bottlenecks.)" …… However, how could a human body of flesh and blood go head-on against steel? until "Class [Warrior]+ Material [Gunpowder Crow]+ Material [Coroman Alloy]. Can be upgraded to [Gokudo Warrior]." …… "Class [Gokudo Warrior]+ Material [Ancient Black Dragon Body]+ Material [Deep Space Type 3 Magnetic Field generator]. Can be upgraded to [Magnetic Field Martial God]." Lu Biping looked at his body that was gradually covered in black scales. The black wings that covered the sky slowly spread out behind him. With just a slight flap of his wings, he passed through the nine heavens. He could feel that the gravity of the planet could no longer restrain him until he reached deep space. His long black hair danced in the starry sky without any wind. His scarlet eyes stared at the deep-space mecha that was flying across the starry sky at high speed. He laughed maniacally and muttered in a low voice,"Ha, hahaha... Now... Now it's time for you to know my tolerance!" 3."Longevity begins with the extraction of forbidden techniques": Reincarnated into a high-level martial arts world, Chen Xuan activates the forbidden technique system and obtains exemption from the price of the forbidden technique. Faced with the cruel situation, he had to extract forbidden techniques and open the path of crushing forbidden techniques! Permanently forbidden technique, Ten Times Longevity Burning Saber Technique. The power of each slash was multiplied by ten times. The ultimate move was a normal attack! One-time use forbidden technique, Eight Gates, Ye Kai. Who could block this kick of Ye Kai! As he smoked, Chen Xuan realized that there was no one else who could stand shoulder to shoulder with him. He was the only one in the world!

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2025-02-08 16:32

I don't know how the new novel is going. Is there anything I need to change? Please help me give some suggestions!

The following suggestions could be used to modify the new novel: 1. Decide on the theme and plot of the story. Decide on the core and protagonist of the story. 2. Make sure that the structure of the story includes the beginning, middle, and end. 3. Make sure the writing style and language style make the story more lively and interesting. 4. Confirm the characters 'personalities and relationships to make it easier for readers to get involved in the story. 5. Make sure the rhythm of the story and the changes in rhythm make the story more compact and interesting. 6. Deciding the ending of the story makes the story more interesting. Revising a novel required constant revision and improvement until one was satisfied.

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2024-09-22 06:33

Who can help me change my online name? It's best to change the first half of the sentence, or give me a rhyming online name with the same sentence pattern. Thank you.

Weiliang's eyes are shallow and sincere. You can consider the following online names: A lonely shadow in the cool breeze, my heart is half-detached. 2. Dancing alone in the cool, the meaning is shallow and sincere, half separated. The dream is cool and the shadow is half detached. My eyes are slightly cold and my heart is half separated. The cool summer is half gone. The cool clouds are half gone. 7. Drinking alone in the cool, my mind is half-detached. 8. The setting sun is slightly cool, and the meaning is shallow and half separated. I hope these online names can help!

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2025-03-01 21:02

After writing a novel, the more I read, the more I can't continue writing. Please advise me how to change the beginning.

Writing a novel was both interesting and challenging. Sometimes, we might feel confused because of the story, character setting, plot twists, and so on, and it's difficult to continue writing. If you encounter such a situation, you can refer to the following suggestions to make changes: 1. Review the story. See if the story is coherent, if there are contradictions or loopholes, if it needs to be revised or adjusted. 2. Review the character settings. He wanted to see if the characters were distinct, if there were any conflicts, or if their charm needed to be modified or adjusted. 3. Review the plot twist. See if the plot turns are appropriate, if they can attract the reader's interest, if they need to be modified or adjusted. 4. Examining writing and language. To see if the writing was beautiful, if it was smooth, if it needed to be revised or adjusted. 5. Examining the target audience. To see if the story suits the taste and needs of the target reader and if it needs to be modified or adjusted. Read and write more. Reading, writing, and revising were important ways to improve the quality of a novel. Read more about their writing styles and techniques, and try to incorporate their elements into your own story. Write more, practice more, and improve more. I hope these suggestions can help you improve the beginning of the novel so that you can complete the work better.

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2024-08-29 06:06

What was the first sentence? And help me translate the meaning of the whole sentence

This poem came from the Tang Dynasty poet Bai Juyi's "Fu De Gu Yuan Cao Farewell". The grass on the plain withers and thrives once a year. The wildfire never ends, and the spring breeze blows, it grows again. The far-off fragrance encroaches on the ancient road, the clear green connecting the deserted city. And send the king's grandson away, full of parting feelings. The willows turn green and the flowers bloom again in spring, ushering in a new year. The whole sentence means that everything in nature is constantly growing and changing year after year, whether we leave or not, we must maintain a sense of parting.

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2024-09-15 07:53

What was the first sentence? And help me translate the meaning of the whole sentence

This poem came from the Tang Dynasty poet Du Fu's quatrain on a spring night. The whole poem is as follows: Spring night, happy rain Du Fu Good rain knows the season. It happens in spring. The wind sneaked into the night to moisten things silently. the wild paths are all black with clouds, and the boat's fire on the river is only bright. In the morning I see the red and wet place where the flowers are heavy in the city of Jinguan. The first sentence was: the wild paths are all black with clouds, and the boat's fire on the river is only bright. The wild path was shrouded in dark clouds, and only the boats by the river were brightly lit by the flames. When spring came, the willows turned green and the flowers bloomed. It was a new spring. With the arrival of spring, everything in nature is changing. The willows become greener and the flowers become more colorful, as if a new world is waiting for people to explore.

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2025-02-19 21:13

Change the sick sentence urgently ~~~

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2024-09-14 08:26
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