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After an intense battle against the Republic, General Grievous and his army are forced to land onto a planet called Remnant.

Un chico sin ningún recuerdo de su anterior vida, es reencarnado en el mundo de Remnant por una diosa desconocida, con una misión. Cogerse a todas las mujeres que pueda...

Light and dark two are the opposite each other two different elements that keep each other in balance without each of them there's nothing what if two different world's Legends their world come together in one place to fight the darkness the key to uphold the light This is a story like many others but different at the same time This is between two heroes who will make their marks in history.

This is your normal " I get roud roller by dio brando" But mc get a second chance to live like other shady 3 wishes isekai P.S not own the php P.S I don't own rwby Warning this is my first novel so some mistake might be here and there so yah

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A NEW STORY LADIES AND GENTS, THIS IS A STORY ABOUT THE DANGERS OF ALCOHOL AND HANG AROUND BAD PEOPLE AND WELL BE RIGHT ON TIME IN YOUR HOME OR YOUR WIFE WILL KILL YOU.

T/n despierta en una tierra extraña, al buscar un lugar seguro, se encuentra con algo peculiar, enterándose que está en el anime Rwby, siendo ahora un jugador que le deparará el destino.

In this book the male lead who goes by the name of (Y/N) is killed and reincarnated into RWBY with a system.Follow through the story as our new MC goes trough many challenges in this new Universe.How will he deal with future threats knowing how it happens?

First story, going to re-write it once I get more experience. Upload schedule, ideally once every week or two, or not, I'm in high school. Don't sue me, this under fair use as a parody/transformative work based off the original k thanks ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Blah RWBY blah system MC got friendzoned and lost his memories

(Edited cover! Pictures aren’t mine. This is my first fanfic! Pls go easy on me.) Team RAYS was an extremely strong team. They were rumored to be as strong as Team STRQ when they were at Beacon. One day on a mission that was assigned to them by Professor Ozpin. They were surrounded by Grimm on the edge of Argus. The Grimm’s target was Ray Adler, the lead of team RAYS, and a silver eyed warrior. Yes, Ray knew who she was and what she was. The Grimm slaughtered her teammates, they had managed to push her into the ocean before she got killed. But it cost them their lives. Now Ozpin needs her help again after a year of training and mourning. Ozpin asks her to watch over a fellow silver eyed warrior. What will she do now? After all her teammates are gone and she has nothing left. (I won’t do any full relationships because I feel it gets I the way of the story. But don’t worry! There will be at least some fluff!!)