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This is really good!!!!!!
READ IT
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very good story and good MC nothing to say
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The story is very rich filled with characters that don't just serve to further the plot but are there for reasons, each having their own unique traits. The chapters themselves does not make me feel as if I were reading some fillers here and there, no massive info dumps as well. Although the story may be too slow for other people it's still a nice read.
If you get passed the prologue, the novel is really worth the read so far. The prologue is a chaotic info. dump where you're shown too many characters to care, but the pace of the actual novel is great! Fleshed out characters, a mysterious title, dialogue that does more than drive the plot, and a world that isnt an info dump- the MC is a young character that needs basic information at times so as a reader we learn along with him. Push past the prologue and you'll find a likeable MC that isn't your basic OP lead that knows everything because he's living a second life.
I'm glad that you are not one of those writers who dragged the story with fillers just to make the story long. To the point it seems like they Itention to torture the the readers. To the writer of this novel, thank you and more power.
A story about mages and weird things happening to our MC which is one. The magic usage is interesting though it isn't quite explained how a mage ends up setting their primary magic form. Accompanied by a great sense of humor that reflects our young MC executed in a very engaging manner.
It is an upbeat story even with horrible things happening(except for the prologue) that makes the characters stronger through them.
too bad i already vote for the other novel before coming here... well next time bro... keep the update steady and many will vote for you... we need an original story like yours more in qidian... g job, and please update more😒😓😔
I enjoyed the synopsis and the self introduction of the author. I enjoy the novel very much so far. It’s in my top 5 so please keep up the good work and welcome back to writing
Just to clarify, when I put 4 stars, that is QUITE good actually. I tend to rate things lower, just to give room in case I run across the most amazing story of all time.
I'd say the writing is very well done, quite a bit better than normal, and shows a good grasp of the English language.
A lot of the story reminded me more of Western storytelling tropes rather than Eastern, but that isn't a bad thing, and can be a welcome change of pace.
Now we just need to get this pumped up to 14 updates a week. I believe you can do it!
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Good job keep it up.
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Up to Chapter 17-
This is quite good, and the writing is exceptional that I read all chapters in one sitting. The things lacking- 1) characters are bit lacking 2) little to no excitements and it is quite boring 3) we don't know anything much about the world yet but maybe it would be elaborated more in the future. Overall, good read.
This novel is really well made the pace is easy to follow, characters are entertaining and unique even side characters have their moments and here is the spoiler "The MC's affliction is another reason to love him and the split with him being a child and ***** at the same time is amazing" the on fault I can find is that you don't have anybody to proofread to find mistakes and spelling errors but aside from that nothing else
I think that the prolouge needs to be a lot shorter. It's just too detailed and long for something that will be unimportant for a big part of the novel. It would have been enough if you just wrote about him being very experienced in fighting, a short summary of his life and then the way he died.But that is only the prolouge and the rest(till now) is actually pretty interesting and well written.Even though I sometimes can't picture what the autor is trying to show me.For example I just can not imagine a 6 year old kid playfully punching someones arm who is around 40cm taller than him while he is lying/sitting on his bed and the victim of that gruesome and violent punch is standing in front of him. This review akes it sound like I really hates this novel, but in actuality I'm in love with this novel. While there are things I don't like about this novel they are only minor and the things I like about this novel heavily outweighs what I don't like abou it. For example that the titel actually answers a question which I had in the beginning, or that you can theorise about what is actaually happening, or who these mysterious characters are. Often light novels just do not give you a damn clue till the genius MC finds the answer to the question.
I really do enjoy this novel. It makes me rethink my love for Seal.
But did you know,
that when it snows
My eyes become large and
The light that you shine can't be seen?
I don't like 1* reviews, so I'll give you one to pump it up a little bit :) //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// 140 characters
Giving 5 stars just because u tried. Gud job
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don't give up!keep release more chapters you will get more readers◥(ฅº₩ºฅ)◤づ (●⊙(工)⊙●)づ(づ。◕ ౩ ◕。)づ((꜆꜄•௰•)꜆꜄꜆say hi~(ღゝ◡╹)ノ♡(•̀ω•́)✨୧(﹒︠ᴗ﹒︡)୨୧(﹒︠ᴗ﹒︡)୨୧(﹒︠ᴗ﹒︡)୨୧(﹒︠ᴗ﹒︡)୨୧(﹒︠ᴗ﹒︡)୨୧(﹒︠ᴗ﹒︡)୨୧(﹒︠ᴗ﹒︡)୨୧(﹒︠ᴗ﹒︡)୨
good story i love itgood story i love item from your friends are like that one person who can help us out and they were the one you can see that coming back for you guys to have you been in my heart to the world and you know how you doing with the best way of saying the truth and nothing is going down in history of our own way to the world and you know how you doing with the best way of saying the truth and nothing is going down in history of our own way to the world and you know how you doing with the best way of saying the truth and nothing is going down in history of our own way to the world and you know how you doing with the best way of saying the truth and
I love this story.good luck to all of you 5TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT5TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT5TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT5TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTYYYYTTYYT5TTTTTTTTTT
Pretty good so far -- Looking forward to reading more chapters
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