Chapter comments on the chapter Learning Magic of the book Chronicles of the Weakest Wind Mage

This is the kind of thing that I was hoping Herscherik novel would cover. Anyhow, nice worldbuilding. Everything seems bleak right now, hopefully there'll be something better in the future. Keep it up!

This is interesting, and a fresh perspective. Definately a keeper for me. Thanks for writing!

"The range that she could control wind was roughly as far as she could see." This means that her range is basically infinite (You can see stars, remember? Those are at least multiple light years away.) So what is her actual range?

Since this is an original story, I'll try to post something constructive. I'm not sure if the issues I mention have been looked into or not, but here goes. Maybe it's just me, but the first chapter and the next two definately give off a different feel. The first chapter I felt myself becoming more and more interested in this character Mia and what she will become. The second and third chapter on the other hand feel like I'm reading a report or essay. I'm starting feel myself growing distant from the character. It's a little like the difference between reading the news and living it. The former lacks the impact of the latter. I'm not really sure how you would address it. The narration flows pretty well and the information is indeed interesting. It just lacks something. It could also be due to the fact that the second and third chapter is the prologue to the prologue. A little disorientating.

Fascinating! Manipulating the air current to eavesdrop on a conversation?

Ok. It's an interesting read. I'll keep reading.

Thanks, the world building is good. Keep up the nice work!

Thanks for the chapter

Looks good so far.

29th.

Ahhh.. the army life :]

Thanks

This novel sounds a bit too depressing by now. There’s definitely something missing.

Girl, you might as well take Naruto as your role model~

Thanks for the chapter.

Nice world setting i like it

Ghøst wasn't here

Er....a bit boring part.😑 Still...

👍👍

Thanks for the chapter