Ouch. Author-san, I hope you dont stack too many debuffs on poor Mia in an effort to make seem ‘Less OP’
I’d rather just see where she goes with her weak magical talent which is a big enough handicap.
I can already imagine in the future she would stop adventures before trespassing her territory with bandit-like lines such as "This mountain was cultivated by me, this tree was planted by me, this road was opened by me, if you want to pass by, you need not lay your life, leave all of your money is enough!" XDDD
After reading these 16 chapters, there's one thing that's been bothering me: every character of even mild significance has all their thoughts laid out in full. We get their motivations and considerations on every decision. Not only does this bog down the story as there are basically two long paragraphs of inner thought almost every other sentence, it also leaves nothing unknown. Not knowing what everyone wants creates *******. Besides, that's what character building is for: If we know what drives a character, the reason for their actions doesn't have to be spelled out.
This spelling out of thoughts also creates a lot of repetition; Mia needs strength and allies to gain power and safety. We know this. Basically every moment of this novel so far has centered around this fact. So please don't treat us like idiots and repeat this over and over.
Hey, Mr.Author are you still alive??? It's been more than two days and there's still no sign of updates, people are suffering from Mia deficiency please update quickly with a mass release to satiate our hunger, pretty please...
Co_da