Reviews of Into the Wylds by SiegfriedStone - Webnovel

Seems like a promising novel. Transported to a new world (VRMMORPG style), has a leveling system and quests. World building looks promising with a lot of possible scenarios.

Review written with only a few chapters released... Some Potential... with clarifications... The basic premise is already known - mankind destroys the earth and so God puts the survivors into an MMO world. So far, so so. The story is written in the "first person" with a interchanging and confusing mixture of past and present tense... which usually happens within the same paragraph but also occasionally within the same sentence. The MC is ignorant, coarse and vulgar, the worldview is violent and the narrative is expletive driven. Unlikeable characters are an essential part of any story but the narrative also, unhelpfully, alienates the reader. (Which is fine if the story justifies it... but it does already raise the question... why did God not just wipe out the unpleasant survivors and start again?) Obviously there can be a valid context for violence, aggression, swearing, etc... but there is a difference between a character having limited vocabulary and a narrative having a limited vocabulary. There is a good potential to the story but it is sadly marred by the text. Sorry to be somewhat brutal but hopefully these factors can improve.

This story has a lot of potential, it is based in the modern world, earth is half dead because people are dumb. One day god gets fed up with it and pulls a whole reset and remakes the world llike a MMO. Our MC is Reginald a normal dude with little faith in politics, who like the rest of the world is plucked from their daily lives to live on a fresh world.... but gets a rare race (not gonna day cause spoilers). Story looks good so far, I can’t say much of the chapter updates as the story is new. But I am looking forward to seeing where this story will go!