Chapter comments on the chapter Prologue - Before a Beginning, There Is an End of the book The Wheel of Samsara

It sounds like a tragedy already

An exceptionally good premise! Almost all novels pertaining to the xianxia genre revolve around the objective of immortality. You are the first author i have seen who has considered the dynamics of life which immortality will ensue. I have no qualms with the way it has been written but i hope you improve a bit upon the imagery and conversation flow. With that said , you are light years ahead of at least all xianxia authors

It does well as a prologue. Its vague but it gives us enough to build plotline and a world. Nice.

It's a very good first chapter

Thanks for the chapter

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Just dtarted

Very nice. I like your writing style. I wish I can write novel as classy as this. Although sometimes you need to shorten cliche and focus on plot/action/emotion scenes. make it more dramatic more up and downs make the reader want for. more.

hmmm... it has many dialogues for a prologue... it would have been better if the prologue was a mysterious cliffhanger event that can be inferred as a part of a future scene or as the origin of the story. This would make readers relate next chapters to it to sort of tie the plot line.

Good Luck Bro, Hope you still giving us more and more chapters!!!

Thanks

I love the way you take your time to describe stuff

The imagery within the first few paragraphs is really detailed. Good job Author I am enjoying the beginning.