Reviews of The Chronicles of the Immortal God by kcgrabin - Webnovel

Be able to write a novel like this, great work author! I’d love to see more. Do you have a discord for readers to join or any other social media I can follow?

First of all, it’s been dropped. It’s pretty funny a the start but It gets dragged on more and more each arc which gets boring. The multiple POVs aren’t well written especially when the MC isn’t actually the MC but his master according to how much the author spends time writing in the master’s POV. I was pretty disappointed as I wanted to see mc grow but the pace of the story was so slow he didn’t do much if anything at all after 100 ch. conclusion, 80% is centred around the master e.g. limelight, women, funny parts and POV, 10% is fang yu, 5% in fang lin (the MC) and the other 5% are the other characters.

i know you have gone onto your other novel and it's doing great as it is a great novel but i still hope that you can maybe one day come back to this as while it stared a bit erotic and comedic and still has bits of those elements thrown in every now and then it isn't necessarily a bad thing as i like that also in the later chapters you managed to balance the series story with the lighter begging of the story. please come back I need him to have more teasing erotic scenes ;) or if you have dropped this and r not going to come back please give a clear answer as soon as possible

this is one of the best novels i have ever read, too bad it’s not finished, i was wondering if you’re going to keep writing new chapters. (sorry for the mistakes, I don't speak english, I'm writing by the translator)

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Dude really liked the story and the characters but dude why no chapter 493? Actually where is chapter 493?hope u update soon.......,......................

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Writing is atrocious. You need an editor to proofread everything. My brain hurt just trying to understand the first few chapters. I don't know if you got better in the later chapters but first impressions are important and so is an editor.

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Just started the book it's great so far I love the characters and how the author puts the book and everything togather keep up the good work

I believe that this is a great novel but the whole splitting thing was stupid. But overall this is an above average novel with some interesting aspects in it.

I mean, I feel like this could be a great novel. I just find the sexualization of every single part of this novel, to the point where you can't read a paragraph without something sexual. Even erotic novels have less sexual content than this novel!

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Sorry, I don't like multiple Characters. I don't like multiple Characters I don't like multiple Characters I don't like multiple Characters I don't like multiple Characters I don't like multiple Characters I don't like multiple Characters

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Main points; really funny, a good story that isn't bogged down by endless repetition. Characters you can love and hate, with a world that doesn't exist for the sole purpose of empowering the MC. Definitely worth your time if you like off beat cultivation stories.

Things may have different effects in our weather it's a good thing or a bad things. But life is life we will go in a road full of adventures that you will never expected.

read until the 20th chapter so no spoiler. interesting idea and bad realization is what characterize this novel for me, I mean i understand it's a very interesting idea to have 2 entity of different *** in the same consciousness but gosh. am I the only one not finding the joke funny and instead heavy ? Plus why by the seven hell would you skip the F*****G first batle of the protagonist ????????? it's one of the key moments of the story ! how is he gonna fight, because yeah when i see "immortal" in the title and it talks about cultivation i hope that there will be battles. not to arrange the case, wtf is wrong author ? do you re-read what you wrote ? I quote "[..]He then smiled as he caressed his forehead. He can clearly feel his strength trickling a little with the unlocking of the first petal. He cheerfully said, [...]." chapter 4 on the 4th paragraph ... why are you jumping to present the back to past and you may be thinking <you just took the worst phrase in the 20 chapters after searching carefully> and the answer is NO. (it would make a too long critic to list all the spelling and gramatical error (which i do not pretend to be abstained from)) now the world case, because yeah the issue above tackle the writing quality, the story development, and with character only good at pun, which are not funny I repeat just ... bad ( it's not even ***ist you kinda feel it want's to be funny but doesn't manage to and end up just being lame and heavy) the character design is also a bad point. on to the world design we were saying, right ? well, it described in three paragraphs, furthermore a dense part about the sect and power distribution WHICH IS IMPORTANT is being push at us like a hot potato and the author expect us to be like "uh ok i perfectly remember all of what you said and wont be lost for the next few paragraphs" anyway this is just my point of view on the story i understand if you don't have the same and maybe I'll read until 30% to see if it's better than what I thought (all my brave support to those hating the novel like me, but who read further).

The story line is amazing... I like the resilient character of Fang U / Fang Lin... This might be a book of fiction but it has opened my eyes to another culture and way of life. Wang Ho should be given a bit of a slack, I feel there's a lot of pressure on him. Over all the Novel is an exciting read.

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First of if can't take less jokes or echi scenes don't read this novel. 😤 ---- If you can... You Should read it! Author-san has perfected daos of twisty-turny plots, shameless and grandpa masters. Lewd masters. The pursuit in the dao of harem creates waves of humor all while MC fails in this regard 😂(so far). The humor is fantastic and author-san trolls the world, pop culture, and mythology with creativity.

The author keep adding fillers and dragging story for too long in each arc. Everything becomes more mess. Running story in parallel and left with cliffhanger and switch. This novel has potential but no longer in my opinion. There are lots of typos. when it becomes premium, there are more fillers. Each chapter is too expensive.

It was going good at beginning but later parts just makes you work your brain not to feel stupid lol. No fixed cultivation style; magic, qi, then science, underworld and even Norse mythology lol and it just keeps going.

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Thanks for the chapter This novel suits me well. I am loving this novel. I hope that you will keep your good work going. I will vote for this every day