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from what i remember this story is great so hope this story comes back don't know if the author has already drop it or will eventually come back and update it hope you do come back and update
Still waiting for a comeback... V4. Btw if you search long enough on google, you can actually find the chapters that were deleted from here. Well if anyone would even bother to read it anymore. I can't find the old versions (N1UH) though, just this one.
This story is awesome but please author update more please...
This story is awesome but please author update more please...
This story is awesome but please author update more please...
This story is awesome but please author update more please...
This story is awesome but please author update more please...
This story is awesome but please author update more please...
This story is awesome but please author update more please...
This story is awesome but please author update more please...
This story is awesome but please author update more please...
This story is awesome but please author update more please...
This story is awesome but please author update more please...
This story is awesome but please author update more please...
This story is awesome but please author update more please...
This story is awesome but please author update more please...
This story is awesome but please author update more please...
I have been reading since it first came to be on Royal Road Legends as Number One Under Heaven, so I have seen how it has changed through the rewrites. Each rewrite had something new that made it enjoyable sure some of the changes to me didn't feel right but it's not my story.
He drops stories almost everyday, His stories might be good but they spontaneity change almost every chapter. Hope he can make his decision weather to continue with story or not.
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seems like he ran out of ideas after number one under heaven, maybe he will drop the novel or something similar, who knows
crappy novel,crappy author nothing else to say really
Dang..didn't really know there were so many dudes hating on BaiSiwa..
This deity came late but i'm giving this 5 stars anyway since Number One Under Heaven was my favorite novel from Royal Road..!!
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Hahaha I was really saddened when the Author went full sh*t.
Kudos to the one who added Greedy Pig and Shameless Author Thank You!
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The novel is great. Thing is, dude is too soft. Learn to ignore the haters or grow thick skin. There are always going to be people against you in life no matter what u do.
Seems like after a while once he posted chapter 2.
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Seems like this book was abandoned. I hope it comes back.
I like the story, but the author, why does he have such a mentality?
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Hey, what's wrong with the story? I keep the story in my space reading to let it have more chapter. When I want to read it today, the chapter was gone?! What's up?!! 😅😐
Crappy ass writing. it's incredulous how it's the same author as the first version, since the quality is so trash, and the author abruptly became so attention seeking and has his head stuck up his ass. IMO the drama about the author is more interesting than the story he writes.
can you please stop judjing a novel on the author mistake and just admit that his novel is fantastic like a original story
Stop being hypocrite guy cauze you are desapointed he stoped writing i am too but it's his choice
Removed my review again ... doesnt matter this author is so garbage worth my time warning others again and again ☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠
there are a lot of entitled people on this review board... personally i enjoyed the writing, characters, the amusing play on the three realm mythos, and the all around lighthearted nature of the story. the only complaint was the release stability. as far as i can see, the only reason that he cut down on his releases was because he prioritized those who read on his patron. which makes sense, why would he chooses free readers over paying ones?
Why is this novel in my library? I don’t think I have read that and I don’t like this one. And I lost one novel from the library. Is this story changed from the lost one??? Confused @@
The amount of detail put in to the mc is not great but is enough for you to be able to picture the kind of person the writer wanted him to be. The story progresses a little slower then some novels but is faster then many others. The plot and story of the novel is good so it is a good read for those that like this kind of genre. For those that haven't read the story give it a try you might enjoy it. Do hope to see it picked up again soon. But if you want to continue with the story it on his patreon. For those that don't like the story I'm sure there are many others you can go and read instead of being negative about the author. This would in turn give those of us that want to read his story but can't pay for it a chance to enjoy it.
if i can rate with 0 star or minus stars i will give it.
this author is f*cking retarded always leave the novels not completed like the previous novels in RRL fcking Author
to summary this novel is sh*t
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