Chapter comments on the chapter Start of the journey. of the book Ascension of the Lightning God

No comments? Aih, this lord doesn't understand, although there are some errors, 'tis good. Keep up the good work!

Also to add to the before comment. This is clearly not magic. Go read a magic novel before coming back to this please and give actual criticism on what could be changed.

That evil thing is already trying to isolate him from his nurturing and loving clan so it can brainwash him....😱😱😱 if he leaves no more getting some more loving beatings that put him at deaths door from his fellow clan mates.. 😂🤣😂🤣😂

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

thx

Thx for the chap

I just want exp

“But to no ANVIL”? You mean avail right? (Heck I could be wrong too lol)

Thnks

there was no effort whatsoever put into that technique, and since when did CULTIVATION only have energy refinement ? body, soul, blood, and etc are all types of cultivation this seems mire like a Basic magic art when all you have to do is form a mana core 😕 also no mention of a dantian or divine sea 😩 are you sure yk what’s the difference between cultivation and magic novels 👀 this shit is horrible it’s lacks diversity, it’ll get boring reading this if to cultivate all he needs to do is keep condescending a damn core, then thats not the worst of it apparently it’s SLOW 🙄 dude wdf possessed you to come up with some shit like this ??