Chapter comments on the chapter Lost of the book Ascension of the Lightning God

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khansubhan070
Novel just started and here's already a harem candidate
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RageKittenOP
Zhi Ruo Rlly? Was it intentional u chose a same name in God of Slaughter?
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SeasonRain
😱😱😱😱 what’s that girl Zhi Rou doing in this novel?????? She 2 timing other novels...😂🤣😂🤣😂
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SirVic
Thanks for the chapter and keep up the good work
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Rextew
Thanks for the chapter 😉
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HollowReaver
Yo, author-san I found something that could be improved. When markus is about leave after making suffcient preparations it would be better to write that he " ...CHECKED if everything WAS in in his bag..." instead of "CHECKS if everything IS in his bag..." but overall your story is pretty reasonable, I like it😁
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Abantao_T_Bagger
Some is there? You have a great plot for this novel but your "engrish" is absolute crap that may kill the mood of the readers
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FortunateSpy5
Every one else has a Chinese name while he has a Western name????
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matt1
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matt1

Hey how come others always find him first in these situations? Didn't he learn energy detection? He didn't use it when he was roasting meet which could attract beast then where the hell was he using it? Please try to keep up with what you're writing..and even if mc is dumb as **** you just gave him a super intelligent systems so please don't write something you don't plan on doing unless it is absolutely necessary
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Kerail
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Kerail

ty for the story. English is not my first language but I think its 'on foot' not 'by walk'. As you probably need to use the expression a lot - look it up.
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