Well because Author Wants so I'm write that
The Story is great and also spelling and grammar
But We have the problem of low reader ! Why ?!
In My opinion this is because the name of novel it's not in view an sparky , IDEAL is too ****** my friend, change the name to gain Ranking
Dear author, my opinon on this novel is that it's good for a casual read but not atractive enought to bring new readers. I believe that a novel should keep a ******* that makes the reader wonder what will happen next, make him feel the pain, happines etc of the mc.
I also believe it's a good thing to have/make mistakes because you can improve into not making the same mistakes again.
Thanks for the chapter.