Chapter comments on the chapter Let's hit the club. of the book Ascension of the Lightning God

Thx for the chap

Thanks for the chapter and keep up the good work

thanks for the chapter

I wonder when will he go back to the original dimension ...

What annoys me the most about this novel is the inconsistency of the personage, he is very social for someone who has been bullying since childhood, and the excuse that you gave to the MG did not kill him, remembering to control himself better in the fights would solve his first mistake, and for the second, neither is it a mistake that his mother could have been killed, sold as a slave, in both cases it would be much worse than simply carrying the revenge of another person, in the first she could have to bear the debts of the mother and in the second she would have to find a way to live alone. do not make the story more convenient for you, do not give convenient excuses and poorly elaborated or distorts much the characters to fit the story. What's wrong with MC spending 2 months in the forest? food? he hunts. He was bullying during his childhood, he was not going to worry about it.

Page 3..... Grabbed not garbed

Page 3.... Screaming not scamming

Thanks

Thanks for the chapter