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KenRingdomStory
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AutisticCoffee
I still check this novel everyday, hope he somehow goes back into writing this story, but seems like I'm hoping too much after this much time passing without any updates. I would still read all chapters even while knowing this most likely won't ever get update again. Hopes the author is fine at least.
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BeastyMs
Its a pity this novel is not getting any more updates.
It is a great novel and my favorite.
Review should not haves less than 140 characters
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iReading
My biggest concern despite my lack of reading: does the mc fall for someone? If so, what gender? Is mc considered a male or female based on chapter 19(?) where it said he was a female. What does the mc count as?
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kmim
Literally gave me cancer, don't put your brain and eyes through this.
Grammar is soooooooooooooòoooooooooooooooooooooooooobadddddddddddddddddddddddd
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KitsuneFoxTail
I initially came across this through the female protagonist tag but how on earth is that a female lead?? I would say that the novel is okay overall but there are so many grammatical errors that make it hard to read. I also feel that the story is progressing a little too fast without providing an explanation on why the events occurred. I would suggest that you get an editor to proofread your work or you read over them again because there are literally mistakes in every single chapter. It has potential but you're not utilising it. It's okay but not exactly great but if you build up on a little bit more, It will probably get better.
The idea of a chuuni character getting reincarnated into an actual cultivation world was interesting but I think that the genderbend was unnecessary. It's quite confusing if the lead can be either gender. Just reading this makes me feel chuuni but I'll see how it turns out before giving it another rating. I appreciate the time and effort you put in this novel but you should have a clearer plot which doesn't fly around the place.
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WintersBlaze
It’s so amazing! So when it started out I wasn’t so sure it was my kind of book because usually I like transmigration books where they wake up in the body of someone who just died and spend the first few arcs trying to get revenge before figuring out the people they love and who they need to protect in their new world and this book isn’t like that at all. It makes me smile a lot though. This kid is powerful but super outclassed because their young body can’t keep up. The internal monologue as the female soul tries to cope with having male body parts is also hilarious and the sheer amount of self confidence and love the kid has for themselves is hilarious. Along with the assassin mother who comes from a strong matrilineal family where all husbands have to marry in and can only do so if the woman loves them or if they can beat her in a fight without hurting her which is like impossible because of the amazing training and like A+++ assassination skills. This child is the first male ever born in the family and yet still possesses all of the female only abilities that the family is famous for with the addition of a male body that comes with certain privilege in the world. It’s kinda an awesome book and it isn’t heavy or full of things that make you cringe or put you in a dark mindset like my usual books but it is still full of action and fighting and awesome combat skills and also one very weird masochistic prince who really enjoys it when the Main Character who is in fact male steps on him and hits and slaps him and calls him a filthy pig boy and that makes me laugh so much because it’s literally like “the person is so hot and they slapped me in the face and called me a disgusting pig and told me to never show up in front of them again because I’ll never be worthy enough for them, now I must have them and when we get married I’ll make them slap me in the face and call me vile names every day. Oh my Gaud, so hot!” Which nearly made me piss myself laughing
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Wybel
Im giving some love to this novel since I feel it s underated and should bxe more popular then it currently is.
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Mythfury
One of the best orginal novel.
World background,character design and plot are great so far..
ALSO STORY ARE WELL Written...
This novel has unique style.
So far every chapter is enjoyable.....
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GourmetFoodie
This is a good story of a Chuunibyou who get killed and reincarnated to another world, the Chuunibyou (Yin Yu) also grow both in body and character where if he's once a prideful brat who didn't have anything to proof it and turn into a kid who rein his pride from time to time while toning down his character (although he's still a Chuunibyou)
His father is basically useless (for me xD) because his mother is the head of the house which makes his mother more influential than his father, but it's a heartwarming family (with some torture as a side show xD).
And did I forget to mention that MC is once a girl who reincarnated into a boy but look prettier than girl? (He's a Trap even though he wear a boy clothes)
Some reader is discussing whether it's going Yuri or Yaoi (even though I didn't have prejudice against Yaoi, I still wish it's a Yuri please!) And I have some candidate now.
1. Lan Yiyan (the girl MC met, MC first friend, and it's the girl of the prophecy)
2. Qin Ming ( a prince whose masochistic side awakened by MC) not him please..I hate him.
3. Ling Tian (a commoner which fight MC, seeded number 1, he got the same name as one of the villain spy Si Tian so he might be a villain)
4. ??? (An unknown guy which MC took notice of, it's said that he use gravity)
1 girl and 3 guy...More girls please AUTHOR!!! I beg you! I will give you powerstone OK?
Oh... i forget the most important part...
This novel is unbearable at first because of its grammar, but I can see author improve as day pass in future chapter , I hope you can keep doing your best author!
Note: Are you going to post 2 ch per day or 1 ch per day? Pick one please...
And author lack on the Dao of making nonsense, while his Dao of New Technique which reader didn't know of because of training arc keeps getting stronger and stronger...
And...
Actually... I like fish....and ...
I think I need to go on a diet because of Author words which Pierce my heart pretty hard so...
More chapter please , to cure my heart!
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CIoudhawk
The novel is really good why 5 stars ? cuz it remind me of absolute choice one of my favourite read so far, also the comedy is gold as ended laughing till my side hurt xD In my opinion the best point is the mc attribute's different this time we stick with yin and ice instead of usual cliché fire and yang attribute in every dam* novel out as personally I prefere the ice and yin attribute rather than the yang one.
The only problem right now is about the world building as we don't know much about it but the story is just starting so don't mind too much.
Well this just a review to support the author :3 i really love his notes in every chapter, well good luck I hope you won't drop this novel like many novels. (ik i have a ****ty english & grammar)
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whe
You disgust me in your selling out to weebs and cultivation readers alike.
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ShadowMoonDragon
Normally I stay away from gender bender genre novels like they're second most discusting thing compared to novels with a r@p!st for a protagonist, btw which discusts and sickens me, but anyway this may be the only gender bender novel which I'll ever like so I say in all honesty I quite enjoy it the grammar at times makes my inner grammar nazi come out in a passion but I LOVE the characters they all make you take them on mentally like they're actual individuals each with own feelings and individualality. I quite hope the main character gets a tomboy gf that would be funny and fanaminal. Also i quite enjoy the pacing currently I hope for alittle more in terms of writing quality and truthfully I was gonna give it 3 stars in that review section but as stated first and last gender bender novel i'll ever enjoy hopefully also I can tell you probably put alot of effort into it so congrats as long as i get atleast a chapter a day you get my stone. Good luck happy writing/typing (^_^)
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FeisalDy
Hmmm... I like the cover very much. Is it your own or you got from google. And btw, i read this novel just because the cover. So, can i know where you got the cover? And i like dual personalities and please add more about it.
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ACZ
I love thisssssssssssssssssssss
But the chapters too few*********w
More pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Recommed
You will love ittttttttttttttttttttt
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BeastyMs
Im really loving this book.
I hope to learn more about Yin Yue (2nd personality).
Keep the good work.
Reviw should not be less than 140 characters.
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Candisse
Please... More update..thanks..
Hahaha.. When you know your momma is super strong.. You have to act like you did not do anything wrong..or your doomed..hahaha
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ShaRinGan
I watched the anime of this chunib-whatever and it was an interesting love story of a boy and a girl with 8 grader syndrome or something....😂 😂 😂 😈 ☺ 😈
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DaoistMyraidHearts
This story is pretty good so far, but I wish that you would put more commas to separate them as I'm sometimes confused. And also this is my troll fake account
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YuKosaka
Author here, I'm going to shamelessly rated 5 star for now and Because of some suggestion, I decide to dual hosting on royalroadl too, To get more readers and this review will be the prove that it's not plagiarism or anything.
Hope you guys can try out my virgin works, thanks in advance.
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SuperHottie_Wizard
Ohh! Sounds very interesting! Gender bender haha The concept of the story looks very promising. Keep up the good work :) Will change the review when there is more chapters.
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NoelHikari
This ia a story about Chuunibyou with dual personalities that she didn't know and dying because of overconfidence.
She got into a wuxia world different from what I expected because I'm certainly sure she will end up at swords and magic world
At the new world, she lost a portion of her remaining memories. (maybe due to the fact she unleash all her energy to get into this world?)
And as you expected she started as baby and not stealing other people bodies. Yep I didnt expect it at all and I am really shocked by the fact that she become he. Still it's good stories so far.
I expect more from the author!
I need more chapter to reach enlightenment!
Although I'm sure that I can't cultivate Virgin Forever technique anymore.
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yu_now
ok looking good and interesting but need more chapter story development is great and mc is little funny. plot is good
mc is reborn as boy when he is girl in his privious life
need more chap
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52Zero
What is this novel all about? martial arts? Gaming? The plot and storyline so confusing but yet im looking forward to it 😊 need more chapters!
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