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Teresa_Wray
It was cute and simple. I enjoyed reading it. Some parts were rushed which I know happens. Some other areas were very descriptive. Some parts were very useless and seemed to be filler. Other than that... good read
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Mus_You
I absolutely loveeeeeeddddddddd this story!!!! I just wanted this amazing story to keep on going, never ending or stopping. Make sure to read this cute and loving story.
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Daoist574035
I enjoyed it, couldn't put it down. However, found some errors in it that could easily be missed. Suspense was very good but easily identifiable. Good job though.
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Shreeya_reads
Character development is good. Story well paced. Twists and turns excellent. Just couldn't digest the concept of so many kids in the family, triplets and then twins.
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Mandy_Calhoun
Absolutely LOVED this story! It had romance, drama, mystery and heartache. Yes, I wanted certain characters to fall off cliffs at certain points but ultimately they got handled in the story. I randomly found this hidden gem and boy, it certainly did not disappoint. Best find ever! Fantastic job author and I canβt wait to read more of your work. You have a gift so donβt stop writing πβ€οΈ
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Yessie6
The story was good felt some details didnβt play out and some characters never came back up like Annie but overall loved the story.
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ReaderBug
Good one. The love between male and female lead is tooooo good and their kid Alexa is a very cute character.
Hoping to c an equally amazing novel for Alexa and Bretton...!!!!
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BurberryScent10195
The story is staight to the point and good. The characters are just right for the story. What i love about this story is that it do not involved complicated, undesirable and suspicious chatacters.
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Chaand06
It was a great story with so many beautiful characters...and the family members were too good to that girl is the best partπ all in all the development was great
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Mahinour_Mohamed
I really looooveeed the story. Some parts were just very exciting. I stayed up late just to finish reading. Even missed some of my studies. I can read it alll again from the beginning
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nisum123
i just lllooovvveeeeeee tyus novel a lotβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈlove the main leads and ofcourse our little main leadβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈlove the way the story is headingβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Cat2005
Good plot. Like the characters and settings done. Hope the author makes a novel about Alexa and Bretton because you can't have a cliffhanger like that. I also hope the author makes one about the rest of the kids that Alex and Kaia had.
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mynameiakhan
The story was particularly good and I liked the fact that how with such small amount of chapters the writer was able to portray the whole story! If you are looking for a romantic novel with all the twist and turns and a happy and satisfying ending then this novel is what you should definitely read. It shows how people connect with each other without even knowing what connects them together. The best part about this novel is the relationship between the father and his child which leads to bring the parents together. This story has a strong female lead even stronger than male if I have to say because the fight with her step father was mostly fought by her alone with help of the team she created herself without letting the male lead know about it and protecting him from any danger. Even if the male lead is not that strong, his love for the female lead is not something to be underestimated. So I highly recommend the reader to read this novel !
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Anuloves
This romantic well written story, is not your typical CEO drama. The plot's really interesting and keeps you hooked till the end. Characters are well drawn and the pace is good. The only complaint I have with our dear author is that, I found length of gap time very long and the ending rushed...other than that, good job and Thank You Dear Author β€β€β€β€β€
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uefuef
I like the story very much. Runs lightly from the beginning, to the klimaks and end with anti klimaks. They never realize have known each other since they were kids, goes to the same school and even falling for each other, eventhough end up wth breaking up. One day he save her life and offering to marry him, in order to save each other from their parents marriage set up... very recomended.
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Miss_Lyn
Sorry were a little **** about the typos and some missing words in some sentences... lol but we make so many grammar mistakes in our reviews...
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vera2000
Hahhahaha...this book is so light and very enjoyable. Short but concise. No heavy drama, no dragging of events. Very inetersting and romantic. A 5 because the author did not let me stop reading. Thank you.
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Floweret
Such a beautiful and marvellous sypru cannot help but to reread it once more because am in love with Alex so so handsome and the daughter and wife are worth everything to Alex so cool
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shiemee
This story is somewhat different from the novels i read here at webnovel, its short but concise which i really like, story line progresses smoothly, the novel really revolves with the main characters. This is a thumbs up!
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EmpressChan
This novel had a good start but I feel that it's ending was rushed. The story started really well up until the climax and then it sped off to the ending after that. It would have been great if Author was able to sustain the story a little bit more before ending it. It's also very short which is quite rare for a webnovel but at least the author still thought of giving her reader the ending instead of leaving the story hanging or dropping the novel entirely. Thank you for your hard work dear author!
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wedding_1998
So love the cast especially the ML,,He loves never failedβ€οΈβ€οΈthis called loves fate..even sometimes they met and has been separated at the ends they love lead them together π₯°π₯°
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Floweret
The story plus the drama was one of a kind.
..deaths,, separation ,,reunion and also the children that make the couple strong and in love with each other
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b1obfish
This novel is so heartwarming!
While reading, I felt a rollercoaster of emotions and quickly fell in love with the characters. The author did such a great job with writing this story and creating an interesting plot.
Honestly love Bretton, Kaia, Alex, Zac, Naomi, and so many more so much!
Keep up the great work!
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missyjck
Good story, nicely written.
However I feel that the ending was rushed.
I was hoping for more details after they knew about the triplets, how they made Alexa accepted the situations etc instead of jumping to like 16 or so years later.
But overall it's good and entertaining story to read.
Once you start you won't be able to stop reading.
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srunag
Short and sweet..I liked it very much...but I expected more about Alexa,triplets and twins....but finally it's a great story..... Kaia and Alex .... happy ending
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riyaagg
Really appreciate the work you wrote.. this story is full of drama .
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loved it to the core it's beautiful... Will look forward to Alexa story
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sanplawer
The story was so good... It just that they hurriedly finished the story... It is much nicer if they let the story a little bit longer... Thank u
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riyaagg
Beautiful story ... expressions ..emotions ... Characters.
all r so adorable specially how they meet several times and got separate to finally meet to the eternity
Thanks dear for writing such sweet piece of work...
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ssc
Restarting stability the story ended so that doesnβt apply. But when the story didnβt end author did upload regularly. Few grammatical errors but not so much that it makes it difficult to read. Love the story. Super sad the story came to and end.
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