Big ups to the author and other readers. I await more chapters. Story is so interesting. Writing quality - mechanical accuracy, spelling of words, punctuation, translation, and vocabulary must be improved. High stability of story update, keep it up! World background or setting should even be real and not limited to only anime worlds.
Big ups to the author and other readers. I await more chapters. Story is so interesting. Writing quality - mechanical accuracy, spelling of words, punctuation, translation, and vocabulary must be improved. High stability of story update, keep it up! World background or setting should even be real and not limited to only anime worlds.
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The stories nice,i liked the creativity behind this story,like the characters,places and etc.I'm not much of a perfectionist when it comes to stories/novels,so some of the errors were fine for meβI don't mind them to much.
Aahaaa what an interesting story .... I hope i will enjoy it ππππ .... Thank you for your hard working ππ but to think about you stopped that nice story ... I feel sad but it's okay π΅π΅
This was so fucking amazing good book I enjoy this book so much I was kind of hot and bothered but who am I kidding I was super horny this book made me feel good and happpppyyyyyyy I love this book continue writing u r really good
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I think it's okay from the title. Anyway, I will try reading this and comment to author for make improvement. I hope this novel good but please publish a new chapter as soon as possible.
It's good imo so read it, it has **** like *** and op mc albeit different and unique and **** so it's good over all so read it uhh all I gotta say is read it and one more thing... Read it
This story is so amazing and so sexy! Thanks author! I'm sad that you aren't writing anymore, but I hope everything is going okay with your personal stuff.
Story is good , characters are nice, ranking is good then why the hell author has to work 4-7 novels at the same time and the chapter release stability is off the chart it's like 12 days 1 chapter frequency
Bro just focus on one novel this one is already in top 100 and has potential of top 10 so why are u wasting it away
I don't know anything just trashing anything and anyone in the and I'll be VICTORIOUS......,...
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"Although there are minor text errors in story, the story is very detailed about the actions of the protagonist and the effects (for instance Ryu having ***). But please stabilize Updates more, and try to edit it better. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
Not much developement yet but pretty good so far.
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Redoing this when more chapters are available
My burning sabre is again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again again unable to quench the THIRST
The story is moving along well. I like how the pitchers painted in the mind as one reads it. I hope to see more of the world that they are in. Also maybe an outdoor scene or maybe even one in a hot springs.
Hi guys,
I will be totally shameless and give it 5 stars because I really want the author to continue this story.
Pros:
-nice system, and seems balanced
-interesting protagonist
Cons:
-Won't become a story with over 300 chapters. (Even if I hope I'm wrong).
It's interesting and fun to read , for development is okay and not too fast, maybe u can add detail about quest reward or it's usage. For charactrer desaign maybe u can make it not too short and not too long about description...
And lastly please give us more chapter.... (γoγ).
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The story is ok so far but is the plot only to have *** or will he get a new goal plus the chapters need to be released faster or people will start to lose interest. I know your doing multiple story's but it's a drag waiting.
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