Thanks for the chapters. Best of luck with the RL; I'm saying this with good intentions, not so you release chapters sooner, definitely with good intentions. 😁
Hmm it's more of a syntaxical And lexical PB: splendid splendor dsn't sound right; could be changed for other things like a gorgeous hall or splendid architecture ; furthermore, repeating splendid splendor 3 times in 2 paragraphs is too much of a repetition :3 hope it helps :)
Tayden