Reviews of Hide and Seek(ongoing revision) by Naru134 - Webnovel

The book was great over all. it made me want to download the Japanese Hide and Seek game and try it out. thanks for he good story and your writing is very good.

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Really amazed.... Horrified as well😨.... Great job.... Well done👏👏.... The way the story was presented was really nice. Just some grammatical errors. Otherwise superb work done by u😊....

I was like horrified... Once I was feeling satisfied that Tina survived the b***h but then I was shocked when I read the last line....... Some grammatical errors but other than that really interesting.. .👍😰

I love the flow of the story. It is quite predictable but it's still good to read. There's a few grammatical errors but it's not a hindrance to understand the story clearly. Overall, it is good!

The book overall is great. The story is intriguing, along with the setting of the story. The prologue is great, the characters are great. Just a few grammatical errors and spelling errors here and there. But overall, it's a good book.

Its good store to read in short time i enjoyed it and i suggest to read this too the other is a good writer andIts good store to read in short time i enjoyed it and i suggest to read this too the other is a good writer and

Short but realy thrilling. the last chapter was too long. is there repetition or something. anyway, such a goos horror story. bravo and nice..

The story was good don't get me wrong. But this author honestly needs fo works on his/her grammar. Almost there! ❤️❤️❤️ Also add more diversity. Use more words, than the basic ones. YOU GOT THIS. 😍😍😍

I like reading horror story and this story appriciates me a lot! I read it long time ago, but it still appear in my mind all the time. Love the way the author wrote.👍

The storyline is quite interesting. The author managed to grab and hold readers' attention and emotion. Great work author! Looking forward for your next story.

It really seems that it is happening in front of me or i was watching a movie Really horrible but very interesting, really awesome. But it would be great if the end was something else.

After all I like the plot. The Ending yeah I was hope Tina could find the solution but It didn't end well. But, for Charles pity for him and there's no other story or description for him later in the story after ge dies

Nice story😃 but ending is okay.........................................................I thought that she will win the game but she didn't...

The story was very interesting as it goes on.. writer did his/ her work bery well..he know how to caught readers attention through out story.

The story is quite interesting and I congratulate the author for a job well-done. The plot is not complicated and is easily understood. Character development and other aspects are well taken care of except for the ending which is very unsatisfactory.

You can write more stories with a better ending because most of the people expect that kind of ending. Your ending is a very nice one but it is sad. It’s too sad that the main character couldn’t defeat the darkness

This was on of the most saded book i read i cried well i was reading this book i would so read it over and over again i love horror storys so far one of my favorites !!!!

It's such a wonderful story😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍...........................I just never read anywhere just love it alot🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩I just felt horrible while reading this😲😲😟😟😟😟.................................bt the endng iz very sad.......,........,...................😥🙁🙁🙁🙁

Very interesting read. I love the author style and can't wait for the next chapter. Very fluent in the story line and keep the reader wanting more

The story overall is pretty good.....its quite obvious about where the story is going but the way the writer had described the story is awesome and the characters and background disclaimer is nice. It felt like i am watching a movie instead of reading a book, the whole imagination was going on in my mind and it was like i am living the story. OVERALL GOOD STORY AND EVERYTHING. KEEP IT UP.

It was short,in fact the shortest story I have read so far on Webnovel and I accautly liked it. The story line was good and so to was the character development. Even though I am disappointed with the way it ended,I appreciate the efforts you pit into creating something like this as I understand that it is not an easy task to write something like this and to be able to bring it out the way you did.

It was good but could be more than happy to hear from them and Lisa is a good day please receive the whistle in a good time to meet you at your earliest response to your email address and Felix got the whistle in Hannah Montana and Felix and Felix got the email I am a little bit more than a good but

It was really nice story after all I was so curious to find what happens next..If you all really want to read horror story plzz read this..When I was writing a review my hands were shaking..I was scared after reading it and while writing this was very hard.Nice story and best way to conveyy a message...

Good one but could have been more interesting. The girl could have survived and could have fought against the dark entity so that no more kids would get hurt. Even the parents needed to know about the truth and Charles deserved a funeral so that he could have slept in peace.