Chapter comments on the chapter My Two-dimensional World of the book Low Dimensional Game

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Lonmar
I can not say that's perfectly logical but the camera's story implies that the weather exists inside ... and why can it put that hand and not a chicken? how did he remove the objects before? but despite this problem of coherence, this story seems quite new. Although it reminds me of "Tales of Demon and God" and "Bringing a Farm" for now.
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Sinfish
Best part about this chapter: MC investigates his unknown phenomenon, comes up with a theory, then TESTS his theory, and finds out it is wrong. This MC is already smarter than 99% of MCs by chapter 2 and the characterization is deeper than 90% of stories simply because there is a clear delineation between what the character knows and what is true and the MC testing his hypotheses in a coherent manner. It might be pretty dumb for him to stick his hand in, but there is a distinct difference between considering possible bad consequences and doing it anyway, and doing it with no thought at all. Plus, the author has set him up with a terminal illness and discarding his past life to begin with and "living his best life", so this MC is allowed to make what would otherwise be foolhardy decisions. I am very optimistic about this story!
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Fei_ra
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Fei_ra

Isn't a drop of blood the usual binding trope? 🤔
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DabanCrow
Gotta be honest. This science talk is boring as hell.
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viki5goku
its a fiction for a reason ,i don't understand why people complain about logic , complain should be about the consistency with which a explained logic or phenomenon is followed through the series.meh i don't give a fck bout u ppl.
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frogunicorn
Hmm, I enjoyed reading the comments more than the story. 😂
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RebeLyon
This could be.a.delusion brought by MC's death. MC is already dead. Lol
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Vanadhi_Lucia
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Mezzanine
This is looking **** I cant lie. The science is stupid and there are already plot holes. Ill read a few more chapters but these kind of problems early on are really showing what kind on novel this wil be.
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oroboros
Interesante al menos vino con un manual.
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Angelojose1
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MariaBarrington
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Riki_Abdurahim
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