Chapter comments on the chapter Opposite Kisses of the book The Tiger Within

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Salexez
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Salexez

Ok I don't get the start of this chapter... WTF! Last chapter she had the upper hand. This chapter she is unable to do ****. Also Vernon's mood changed 180 degrees. This chapter needs some rework. I am fine with the emotional chok of him being there and attacking but him suddenly kissing Ky is so out of place that i wish I never read that. Could have him scambeling away leaving her in a mess just fine but him kissing her shows she was at his mercy, mercy he wouldn't show 1 chapter ago.
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