Saw this story, it sounded like a good read, haven't read it yet, but since it's an original work, I figured as a fellow author I'd stop and give it a review. If it lives up to the review, I might just write another, or at least comment on this one and say that It lives up to my expectations. Maybe I'll write a review on it on my blog. But, if I do....don't take anything to heart, when I write a review on my blog, it's seldom entirely positive.....but that's just me. I b*tch about the things I like and the things I hate....
*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters.*
Constructive Criticism: I would like to see a bit more of the structure of her current world... also, the first two chapters felt very slow when I was reading them though you came in with a good story shortly thereafter... I don't know a way to correct this if it can be, but I do suggest that you ask people to read at least 3 chapters before deciding whether or not to read your book, for it does take that long to be clear if one would like the story or not.;,;.
Positive Feedback: Very good character development and decently clear plot and world design.
Personal Feedback: At first I thought that this novel was going to be prosaic, however, after reading all the way to chapter five, I actually found it to be very alluring. I did not want to stop, but I have other stories to both review and to catch up to, so, for now, I have to (metaphorically) put the book down. I will pick it back up when I am able.;,;.
I'm not good at grammar so i'll skip the grammar matter and give it to those experts. The story is slow developed as author stated but after read for 6 chapters i still can't find the reason for sacrifice.
In ancient time usually sacrifice offered to God for the blessing or to remove disaster/plague. In this story i don't know what this sacrifice use for.
Thrill that build in first chapter somehow disappears until the chapter when sacrifice conducted, and that's quite long.
Character design is good, reader step by step can judge how the main character personality developed.
For reader that enjoys romance, this romance story maybe will suit your taste.
If you love reincarnation. Betrayals. Love. And suspense. Please read this book. I love it. At first I was iffe because of the cover, but the way the book is I love how the cover is included with the story.
Thank you! And please continue!
I love how the story develop and it really pique my interests. I somehow feel that it's some kind of a mythology and I'm so interested in that kind of literature. I give you that kind of rating coz I'm hoping for a stable update. After reading those chapters I decided to add this to my library. I really love the MC.
Hi, the author here! I was previously planning on continuing with this novel until the 10th of June, but my plans have changed! I will be updating everyday starting from today, so I'm sorry to the frustration that my previous plans may have caused any of you.
Please forgive me for any grammar, spelling, or other mistakes. I am a first-time author and have a busy life (I am a medical student).
I will try my hardest to update every single day, but if I miss one, call me out on it and I will do a double release for every day starting today the 12th of May. (For example, if I released a chapter today but fail tomorrow, I will release three chapters on the 14th). Someone keep track of that.
Honestly, I truly hope that all of you will give this novel a try. And I accept all comments. Please just comment/review/etc. This author is needy and needs support.
(p.s. I am also shameless, so I gave myself 5 stars to motivate myself in keeping my goal. Yay. Have a nice life!)
I know that shocking truth!! As Mai was buried under the earthly soil something came to her mind like a rumbling thunder that could pierce through her mind. She realized I who has been taught to be a sacrifice ever since young was buried alive as a sacrifice for earth and not heaven. Then a chilling thought came to her as if the devil himself whisper to ears, telling her that she would be in the netherworld and not heaven. “I’m an pretty sure that is truth hehehe sounds about it right?”