He asked her: "Do you know what part of you I hate the most? It is your limitless arrogance, the same that makes you think that it is possible to accomplish those ridiculous dreams of yours!”
She couldn't help but beam proudly, and said without a hint of hesitation in her voice: "Just shut up, and be witnesses of my dreams becoming true!"
One of the most hilarious name is have read in whole webnovel. 'Broken Earth Kingdom' well it gives a relaxing feeling as there is no blatant advertisement of a Nation in this story.
The story is interesting just fix the grammatical errors.
The story was a bit overwhelming the first few chapters, but once you get used to it, it becomes easier to understand.
There are few grammar errors and some awkward word choices, but none that distract you too much from the story.
The story pacing is really well done - I could even learn a few pointers from it. It's very engaging and keeps your interest all throughout.
Overall it's like a combination of a wuxia novel (the cultivation levels) with anime characters in it. A great read, one that I'll be keeping in my library.
While the writing quality is good, I liked the world background. There's a lot of action and it reminds me of a typical anime. Keep up the good work author!
Really like it! Apart from the comedy being quite 'peculiar', I think that fantasy is really well thought about and it's consistent, not slow changes in it so it's not boring to read at all. I'm really happy and looking forward to read more.
Great novel, I have always loved cultivation novels and the cultivation system here is amazing!
You need to publish more chapters per week. Keep improving your writing.
It's an epic fantasy novel, with a very detailed storyline and descriptions of the world it is set, and neat writing. And a very shameless couple.
It's already one of my favourites. Don't give up, author!
Really good fantasy story! A mix of a cultivation system with more medieval fantasy monsters. The interactions between Rose and Thorn are interesting. Keep it up! >3</
This review is part of a review swap and is valid as of chapter 21.
Given that this is an English language platform I'd primarily describe the story as a D&D style adventure despite the cultivation system described in minute detail.
You have the Hero (or in this case Heroine) leaving home for the betterment of self, which in a D&D setting translates into levelling up. Levelling up is best done by adventuring, and adventuring D&D style is best done by gathering a party.
Enter the Loyal Master Retainer, and we have a party of two, with the Hero explicitly stating that she'll find more named members and add them to her party.
The first twenty or so chapters are in ways similar to the beginning of the Dragonlance novels, and the second half of what's published thus far takes us through the setting up of trust, learning each other's habits and the Major First Test. Major First Test being a tournament.
The story is written in multiple third person point of view in past tense.
So for the stars.
Writing. Somewhat shaky English and a tendency to mix past and present tense. Overall usage of non-standard English, but you get used to it after a while. Four stars.
Updates. This is nothing I've suffered from, but I can see the publishing history. A gaping hole of several months doesn't speak of stability. Three stars.
Story. Done right for what it is. Five stars.
Character. There is one main character fully fleshed out. Add one major supporting character also fully fleshed out. The rest of the characters all have minor roles and for that reason, understandably, not as rounded. Five stars.
World. Done right for this kind of story. Five stars.
Goes into my library for now. I'm curious to see where this is going.
It has a good world background. The story development is quite fast, and I like that. It's very rare to find a MC that want to destroy the world. I hope that you keep writing.
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