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ZALTARR_ABASSI
the story is great overall and fun to read but returning back to one piece his debuff is waaayyy too much. I mean instead of all those otherworld travelling he could have teleported to a more peaceful island in one piece and trained to a much more powerful self. If all those powers gained from other worlds only account to a level even lower than buggy, its better to jst train in one piece itself than wasting that much time. Another thing which weirds me out is he has a whole mansion and stuff in him WITH ley lines but he himself can't use magic. Since its in his soul wouldn't he be able to access that ambient magic. Anyway other than that it was a really great read, specially the HP arc is better than most hp fanfics.
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Polar_blue
this book is a lie. came here for a cat story, but ended up with a human furry cat wannabe. useless ........................................
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oLUBTo
Good novel out of all the omniverse themed novels i have read a good 2nd place. **. dont ask palace 1 because i forgot the name after 20 other novels i read
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G_Mango
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G_Mango

I read a hundred chapters of the MC being OP and now he is the worst in the One Piece. You marked this as a OP MC not nerfed af MC don’t waste my time and others by putting tags that won’t be upheld. I rarely right bad reviews but this bothers me I wasted a ton of time to just be disappointed. Maybe next time author.
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Zeroz7
Ya se que esta historia quedo aquí para la nueva creación pero daré mi opinión, la historia es buena pero hay ciertas situaciones que la verdad fueron muy confusas y malas 1. El arco de HP fue bueno algo diferente a lo normal pero al llegar al salto de tiempo nunca entendí la relación con Luna, se que ella es vidente pero no se explica su relación 2. No estoy de acuerdo de que todas las mujeres sean sus mujeres, ej al salir ciertos mundos aveces se llevo otras mujeres y por defecto se concideran futuras esposas cuando el solo los incluyo como para darles un lugar para vivir deberia ser más bien algo así como súbditos no es necesario todas mujeres es calidad sobre cantidad 3.al mundo de danmachi no entendi que mrd era el vampiro que lo envio 4. Ciertamente es molesto que las mujeres no puedan salir de su mundo yo pensaba que haría su tripulación con sus mujeres aunque sería mejor después de un tiempo para que pueda conseguir las de one piece 5. Tampoco me gustó la idea de que perdiera sus poderes, osea endiedo la idea de las leyes del mundo pero normalmente los MC pueden romperlas o lo común en viajes entre mundos es que aunque la energía "mágica" ya no estedbee haber otra energía que se usa que tiene cada mundo y le permita usar magia
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GeneralAldrnari
After Zeltrech shove him to other world with the restrictions etc.. I facking blitz it directly to the one piece arc. Like really the zero no tsukaima arc was pretty redundant and useless. Pretty mutch the purpose of it was the "Bond" and shiet, sigh Well atleast its a decent story and good to past time.
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sampito_pato
hmm, first time in this do not pay much attention to the rating, this is my personal opinion of the novel. The story had a bright future, it could be said that the development of the story had a lot to offer. Well this is the summarized plot, a person who lives in the void after dying, reincarnates in an artificial body in the world of "one piece", so far so good, as the story progresses the character wakes up with a system which indicates a couple of missions, at the end tells him that he is too weak for that world and gives him the opportunity to reincarnate in another world to improve his strength. The story was going well, it begins to unfold in the world of volume 1, (parallel because it is not the same as the original, the story passes and comes to an end without emotion, so much damage that the MC suffered to finish everything in one second, Ok let's say that up to here well. Everyone thinks that it is time for me to return, but no, it turns out that he has to go to another world because they make him wait 3 more years, the other world is the same as the first, the story passes, it is he gets stronger, his statistics increase, ok the world ends and when he is going to receive the rewards it turns out that he invokes a being that sees his history and says, "Hey, you don't see worlds as reality, so I'll send you to another world and apart I will increase your age in 2 years because I want you to enjoy the women you have ". (Something important, if it is harem, but it is the type of harem that sex does not exist, wait 114 chapters for sex, but when there is a connection it is not by penetration of a "virile member" in the "vagina", the protagonist has animal inheritance, this one has a tail, the woman also has a tail, now 1 + 1 = 2, intercourse is carried out with the "tails", and they do it where the "tails" grow), when the guy passes the 3rd world that already gives chestnut to continue watching the series, finally it's time to go to the world of "one piece", but there is a surprise in the next chapter, the guy magically has 3 daughters and 2 women are pregnant, and there he lost all my points. Now you think this is it but nooooo, you have to see that when he enters the world of "one piece", the system tells him "Hey you have to forget about your 3 previous worlds, since your strength is only regular in the world of "one piece", so start to make yourself strong again. Well if someone likes this kind of story go ahead, but I unfortunately have to say that I lost 117 cap, that is, time of my life watching this to take a big disappointment. All this text is translated, since my English is terrible, but I needed to write this and not let people waste their time like me, if the person likes this type of novel, go ahead, but you are already warned: P
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enryuuuuu3
TRASHHHHHH..............!!!!!!!!!!
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The_Hero_Of_Old
The mc is bland, tries to make an intelligent system that's trash goes to one piece, but he's too weak, so he goes to Harry Potter? A world that is based on magic and relates to nothing in one piece then goes to Is it wrong to pick up girls in a dungeon which again is magic based and little training. After three world's he returns to one piece, but I stopped reading. Most early chapters, there's just unreadable paragraphs.
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Dr_Chad
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Dr_Chad

I respect you author but let me be honest, the grammar is all over the place, I can understand some paragraphs, but most of it, seems like I am reading in MTL, horrible, no offense. Secondly, your power ranking isn't balanced, every world he goes, he want back to zero, it's like his previous hardships we're all for nothing. And also the structure of your sentences we're hard to read for me. That's why I'm dropping this, but Good Luck in your future endeavors.
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Yuuki123
Too much harem members and that members just like trophy no interaction mentioned and the girls become his. Story is rushed from one to another without gain any significant strength from previous one but make him more weak.
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Gfdsa
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Gfdsa

Dropped....The writing is kinda good but I haven't found anything that could keep me going. So, I am dropping it. You can try, you might like it but I didn't find anything good. That's all.
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Ptitkactus
Just finished reading chapter 118 and all i can think is " the author is a fucking useless piece of ****" .... I mean , basically all the things the mc have done and all is gains mean nothing since after 117 chapters and 3 different worlds he got the same power as a cannon fodder at the start of one piece :( What was the point of all the **** he done since the start of the story then :(
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NineTailsOfTheVoid
Only with chapters 56-61 make me want to drop the novel, all is well, the story is mounting well and suddenly you make everyone attack him and he does not defend himself literally throw him off the stairs but he does not complain or do nothing and let's not talk about chapter 61, nor did I finish reading how stupid I found
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CIiff_Hanger
Too many info dumps which makes it drag on. And a few spelling errors. Story development is poor, was in one piece amd then immediately jumped to HP. Again infodump makes it drag. Character design isnt good. The system has a personality which ruins it for me by forcing comedy which breaks the flow World background is meh. Negative points for unnecessary HP bashing. Its a great world and I fell that the bashing ruibs it completely.
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Be_n
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Be_n

It was good until the end of the DanMachi ark. After that ark he loses his memory of his life on Earth, meaning he dose not have knowledge of the worlds he goes to thereafter.
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Eom
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Eom

I don't even remember this anime??😔 if volume 4 is an interesting (anime,novel...) i will come back😉🤗 "##########'**********'(::::::::::)'**********'##########"
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Alien_Space_Bat
Nice novel... But.. For the love of gods... don't read after chapter.... Pls our sacrifice may not be in vain. MC's brain stops working after chapter 56. I curse myself for reading that **** by wasting my sleep.....heck i was almost enjoying upto that moment🙏👍🤦🤦🙅
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demonm
droped........................................................................................................................................................................
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GodShu
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MidnightNyx27
ITS SO AWESOME!!! 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆THERE SHOULD BE MORE!!!! 😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣
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Asphyxiated
One of the best I’ve read has solid development all around and fair update stability wish he had more tho lol if u got a patron or Smithn lemme know love to support it!!!👍😩😩😩😩😩😩🤯
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Insane_Pumpkin
And i finished... Author i know that it's good to make interesting novels but i have to sleep it's fucking 3rd in the morning and i just finished reading it, overall this novel is 1st for me from all crossovers i read and in top 5 of harry potter fanfic (i read over 2000 of them some over 300k words so yeah..). One thing for sure this novel is not leaving my library until it's abandoned or finished so continue writing author you have my eternal support. [Im too lazy so i copied my comment for the last chapter]
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Alberto_Kalach
Dude my only complaint would be that the chapters are being super smallll I’m dying for more Awesome book awesome story and awesome Mc
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A_tired_immortal
Muito bom, um dos melhores que já li até hoje, no início eu achei que ia ser igual os outros de one piece mas aí vc foi para Harry Potter começou a ficar mais interessante , na minha opinião eu acho que se você quiser que o MC vai para outros mundos , e melhor ir para mundos que tem magia , tipo Black clover ou mahouka
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SushiKat
Love the OP MC that is Bashing HP World LOL Thanks
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Ptitkactus
Nice story with a lot of potential , but loose all interest after chapter 57, I honestly don't know why the author feel the need to create a convoluted mess like this but I think it serve no purpose beside extend his stay in the HPverse... with all his powers and money he could have find a solution to his problems without all this unecessary bul**** :( Really hope that the author with stop writing this **** and go back to all the potential that the story had. P.S. It's just my personal opinion, like everyone else in this world I have the right to my own opinion :)
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asaade_ragnarokm
too many useless info dump that it became boring so i skipped to the end and i still somehow gets the gist of it, take note it's still chapter 1 and some sentence doesn't make any sense
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