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ShaNnia
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maroon485
I will probably be writing this review solely because I love the cover so much! But the content is also on par! While the characters are carefully formed to create each of their unique personalities, the summary is simple but detailed and like I said, the cover is the best part of this whole novel!!
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SelinaLe
Very well written. Great storyline. Entertaining, lifelike characters. One of the better novels here on WN. Good job author, keep it up. I’m loving it.
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sakuraminha
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sweety009
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Naju
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Naju

Altough this story has moved I will still write a small review. I will first start with that I noticed that the author is new to this which I will keep in mind as I give my critique. As an author you need believable interactions within the world, so when making a new setting you need to have som kind of base when world building. What do I mean with this? Well a perfect example is when Luna faces a ex guild member in the tournament. The man had legit R*PED a PRINCESS and got away scott free. This make no damn sense in a feudal society and makes the world unrealistic to the reader. As a author you add these characters with no thought of "is this character believeable?" So how do you make your world, your characters real? The answer is both simple and hard. Immerse yourself fully into your work. Write down notes on what kind of culture they have, sociatal rules and where they come from. What kind of impact does magic have in society, and how does their increased lifespan affect their lives? What's the downsides to it? For instance does it affect fertility etc. You can't make a fantasy world / race and just copy the human structure of society, politics and views. To be honest there is more issues but I think I got my point across(?) I will end my review by saying that this is still a decent novel considering the author is new. But you (the author) should always try to improve yourself. Read guides and expand your base knowledge in making your story even better. And of course if you have any questions or want to go into a more in depth discussion just contact me. I wish you all the best.
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lumydee
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lumydee

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DingDongSong
It seems to be a very entertaining and interesting story from what I can get of it from the summary. I will for sure read it so keep the chapters rolling on in. I’ll give it the high rating for now but I’m sure it can only get better the longer I read. πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°
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Dantei
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Dantei
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Dantei
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LazyCumber
I have read up until chapter 191. I have to stop because of waning interest for the ML character. For what is painted as magical and savage/dangerous world, Macha has no substance. She has no initiative, not self reliant and too candy for my taste. Like an airhead. I gave 3 stars for the background setting. I don't know how author sets her up for later chapters but this is the review at this point in the story.
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_wakanda
This is a very good story, love so many tyns abt d story, the character development, the story it self and the way various monster are been developed and are tied to one myth or the other, and lastly I love d mixture of romance and action. Good work author Baby Tanuki
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_wakanda
This story is really great, love the way the monster are been developed and d way dey all tied to one myth or the other. Also love the translation quality better than most that I hv read here, also the way the story is been developed with the action and romance seems great. and I hope it wld continue without any hindrance or difficulty. Nice one BabyTanuki
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SageOfThirteenRose
Let me remind u ,this is more to romance..erk. The tag of war and military make me thinks the story a bit brutal. I thought Macha would be a great fighter for the guild as I read her name's meaning. I just read up to chapter 50, I can't eat romance when I expect Macha gonna be like assassin. The author lacking in the fighting scene but I give a thumbs on the romance. That's all, I'm gonna drop this. Till then, this gonna be a good romance story but the expectation kills me. Bye
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Whiterose1502
The story is very adventurous and full of surprises a big thank you to the author and looking forward to more updates.Thanks once again and hwaiting
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CellsBella
Love this story I cant be more detailed. I'm cant believe that Tyr might die! It can not happen. Thank you for the update. Looking forward to more!πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–
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InfernalRhage
I have to say I have really enjoyed reading this so far. The writing quality is amazing and continues to improve with every chapter. I will say it started off kind of stiff feeling but the effort put in really shows. From what I can see the author has a set update schedule that he sticks to giving his readers a chapter everyday which is a nice change from others who either update once a week or randomly. While I am still in the early chapters the story is developing beautifully showing the readers an amazing fantasy world that we get to explore along the Macha (the story's MC.) As far as the characters go they are all well developed and a great change from the usual 2d cookie cutter characters found in most novels on this site. The MC Macha is a perky up beat young woman, yes 32 years old is still young. After finding herself lost in a new world instead of falling to dispair she works hard to learn the language and doesn't seem to let anything get her down for to long. Tyr the novels male lead starts off as probably one of the most unlikable guys you could find. He's cold, arragant and doesn't seem to mind the fact that his bad decisions lead to the death of his guild members. As the story continues you see him slowly open up mellow out under the constant barrage of Macha's positivity and kindness. The author seems to be focused on showing us the world around them instead of telling us. What does that mean? Simply put no annoying info dump chapters that shove the information down our throats, instead we get to slowly explore the world along with the MC. I got to say the discription of the city as Macha first reaches it is amazing and paints a vivid and gorgeous picture in your mind leaving you dying to explore it yourself. An over all amazing novel I can't wait to continue reading. BabyTanuki did something with this novel that I felt I must mention due to it adding a depth to the novel that others just do not have. Whats that you ask, well as you read you will come across different paranormal creatures from multiple different myths and cultures. Instead of just assuming the readers know exactly what he is talking about he adds little notes at the end of every chapter involving these creatures giving a bit of actual background on said creatures. While most might not even bother with reading these I find them highly enjoyable and appriciate the extra effort he puts in to make sure the readers know what he is writing about. To sum it up it is a great read and definitely worth your time. Many thanks to the author for all his hard work in bringing this story to life for us!
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Lukis_Aurelius
For the first time writing a novel you did a great job even from the beginning and it only got better as time went by! You have a real knack for pacing and your charecters are engaging without being too cliche or anything. Overall great read!
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Roychopper
If you love adventure and romance then this is the story for you! The first few chapters didn't captivate me and i was about to drop it, BUT i'm so glad i didn't stop cause after those initial chapters, it got so much better as we see the story unfolds! Honestly i'm mainly in this for the FL and ML, so when the synopsis says "love interestS" that really makes nervous cause i dont want them to separate one bit. However I trust the authors plans for their romance and can't wait to see how the characters grow physically and emotionally
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AtTick
I'm so glad I decided to give this story a read. It's well-written, the world building is thought out and complex. The further in the story, the better the background and characters are. If it was a paperback, I'd be sure to buy it (which is ΓΌber rare in my case). MC is sometimes erm, too trusting? Naive? But it also might be is that I'm just too jaded and not used to see better in people. Anyway, it doesn't happen often and she does learn from her mistakes. The ML (#1?) is ufufu, a really yummy specimen, his insecurities and coddling notwithstanding. I just pray he stays as ML until the end.
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RoyalCoin
A must read original novel with regular updates. If you enjoy books on elfs, action, original world building (and I mean Original) and mature topics this is the novel for you.
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Kaguyama_Shouto
Please continue this storyyyyy!!!!! I love it and will always support it! Need more chapters hehehe, thanksssss My thoughts The story line is good, the description summary is nice. I really love violence,revenge,war, action and romance type so this is basically my style! Looking forward for more chapters!!
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Acedus
I would go in-depth about why this a good novel but then I would just be repeating what everyone else is already saying. So basically to summarise. Good characters Nice Plotline Great payoff for some setups And the *** scenes don't feel like they were written by a 12 year old virgin
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AnukSedRal
From darkness towards light, from confusion towards wisdom, this journey will bring you in a new and fantastic world. The clearer the soul, the farthest one can see through Macha's eyes. Magic wraps all things around, and mithycal creatures live alongside people. Great wonders thrill the eyes, and emotions sway the heart. There is no journey without friends and no life without love. I dropped into the novel's world and I was swept away in a flurry of emotions and lifelike images. I see how the characters grow and influence and support eachother, and one of them has a soul so big that she may envelop us all. Read and enjoy another world, and grow alongside them! See you at the end, if you decide there is one!
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Bewa
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Bewa

I’m doing this so save 5 of my brothers from the evil author. But on a serious note. It’s a fantastic book to listen too. I have cry laugh and bin furious at time. I hope too see more of the magical, wonderful and dark world. Keep up the good work. Warm wishes Bewa
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Robertp3001
I'm not a masochist so this story is difficult to read. I mean she is pathetically weak which means everyone is allowed to trample her with no consequences. I don't know if she gets stronger later but right now it's too difficult to read.
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lonewalkerforever
I just love this story .but i think think the views of kristof and luna can also be introduced it can also be used to develop the story .and the story update is satisfactory but the author can try to add some more chapters if possible.
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Navakor
This story takes a refreshing side of fantasy that we don't see quite often on Webnovel. Instead of throwing action scenes and poorly written characters, it embarks us in a beautiful world along with Macha, a human character. And that's the reason why she's lovable. She has her qualities and defects, she's human. And all the side characters have those qualities too. As for the writing, the descriptions are as clear and precise as we were watching a film. The pace is good, not too fast, and we have enough surprises in a chapter to want the next. That's an excellent read, and I wish the best for you, author !
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