Reviews of Alternate World Online by demi - Webnovel

It is a Great story, with some interesting and sexy developpements. Surprise races. Fun changes.lots of good content. Then rewrite is even better!

Slow going plot MC claims to have bad luck but in fact he’s really stupid because he keeps making obviously bad decisions. You’re a vampire why would you turn your vampire spawn into a werewolf your races most hated foe

Writing quality, random errors here and there. Skill names sometimes changes between chapters with no warning. Update rate is a bit slow. Almost no story development. World background isn't thought out at all. Character design is pure nonsense. I'll summarize the parts of the story's beginning, everything after is a spoiler. MC tries to get a class, instantly rejected and banned from all the guilds (Paladin, Hunter, Swordsman, etc) one after the other. No reason at all, steps in through the guild doors, rejected and banned. Forced plot happens, he teleports to the vampire continent. Offends all the vampire class instructors instantly. Saved by the Queen, magically becomes one of the 2nd highest ranked vampires serving the Queen. MC has free beginner gear, when buying new gear later, discovers that the beginner sword (does around 10 dmg?) costs 1 gold coin in the shop, in an era with bronze/copper, silver, and gold coins. He also got an extreme discount because of his special status as vampire nobility. How are players suppises to survive? How do the peasants in those kingdoms survive? You only get a few copper coins from killing mobs, and peasants live happily on farming wheat? Later encounters human girl (abandoned by human family or something) adopted by werewolves. Slaughters her beloved family (few dozen people) and the father she adores brutally right before her eyes. Heavily damages her, forces her to become his pet. System does some brainwashing for loyalty. Later murders her foster mother. Decides to evolve her werewolf bloodline so she becomes some sort of Alpha Wolf, probably something like royalty. She breaks free from the system's mind control and runs away. Later MC goes to the werewolf kingdom, murders the royal family, massacres a bit less than half the kingdom. Eventually captures the girl, brings her to the Vampire Queen. Queen decides to kill the werewolf on the spot. MC asks Queen to spare girl's life. The Queen's favorability (relationship, affection, good feelings, etc) towards him instantly plummets into the negatives. Yet he continued asking another 3/4 times. Magically, the werewolf girl, seeing her mortal vampire enemy, asking the Vampire Queen to spare her life. Her hate for him instantly disappears and her love for him reaches infinity within a spilt second. I asked about this in the comments, and to summarize the Author's response. "You see, child. Anyone with a heart would have feelings towards someone who saved their life." One major problem, MC murdered her family and slaughtered half her kingdom, he's only saying some words, no saving happened, it's highly likely it's just a show the VAMPIRES are putting up to mess with her, the (alpha) WEREWOLF girl. But no, she's not suspicious at all considering vampires and werewolves are absolute mortal enemies, and apparently that's how love works. That's barely a tenth of the twisted reasoning and the nonsense that happens within this story.

Don't read this ****. The author is fickle, he changed the skills every now and then, the story jumping around to much the MC goes one place then 5 minutes later goes to other place. Bruh that's not how gamers play. And what's with the MC Questionable IQ?

The VRMMO game in this novel really like SAO but the choice was given to player to play it. Those who choose to play this game really have the guts or really stupid. MC is like a newborn killer in this game. Blaming everything on his bad luck but continuously making wrong choice without thinking of the consequences. Even without PK his choice of action at least kill 60% of the player in the same maps for his own level up and item upgrades. new player will automatically will sacrifice their own life playing on a map without quest NPC in beginner village. A real tragedy for player indeed.

The story mc/author reasoning is not good, if the grammar and character decision was a little better it would have been a 3.5 novel. Story world background was the only thing good.

I honestly liked the novel. It is by far my second best to read next to MMROPG: Martial Gamer. I very much enjoyed your content and hope the work continues onwards.

Still on the first 6 chapter and looking forward to the rest. Even though the MC is kind of dull the twist is interesting, as this is still his first day in the game is to soon to judge but definitely an invasion and using some anime ideas......very curious to see if the MC will really make good use of the Pets/ minion feature.

One of the best rpg novels.I read in webnovel And I wish the auther good luck and keep up the good work.... ... ............... .................... ...........................................☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺😅😅☺☺☺😅☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺

Awesome story a new on the idea of death games. Only problem is the story gives to much credit on the mc. And as such regard the other players as too dumb or just plain unlucky. Would love to see the mc getting challenged from fellow players. Or maybe thats coming soon?

What the actual ****, the requirements for the updates are plain rediculous, most original stories don't even make it to the top 10 not to mention a story that was stopped. Please update if you want stones because if not, the people who have finished all current chapters will drop this novel.

Great novel but story progressing feel to haste and lack of detail. It's should explain a little bit detail assume reader don't have any gaming experience even tho it's about game. The beauty of RPG in it's detail, game introduction, skill explanation and style when execute and etc. Adding climatic scene

Nice game world with a main character between good and evil 😇😈 and a way of thinking that evolved with people he meets👌👌. 89 chaptrers so far, I look forward to reading the following chapters!!!

I found it interesting. Keep it up and hopefully you will continue on with such interesting plot. and 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 and so on and so on and so on :D

Quite a refreshing read its actually surprising thw low power stone rank even though i just read 82 chapters straight and still whanted more so the million dollar question is did the autor drop this lovely novel? If so its a shame cause i could actually see the love and dedication put in to this

Goos Job vrmmo, yang pernah aku baca itu sabgat mengagumkan, ini juga salah satunya, jgn putus asa sobat kamu pasti bsa menyelesaikan novel ino, jgn tanggapi kritik2 bodoh yg membuat mu mudah putus asa

i've a bi problem with this novel : It takes place in an "absurd" world ( 'v got no problem with that, it's just a fact, it's not realist) but the people are incoherent in this world, there is an absurdity in the absurd, it would have make sens if it had been done with the intention to, but i fear it's not the case. It degrade severly the novel

dude. thank you. let those readers say what ever they want. just be yourself and dont give up. for those who says bad things about this novel. better dont read it at all, the writter didn't force you to read this. so better shut up, and we all have our own point of view. let there be peace on earth. Amen hahahaha 😆😆😆😆

It's easy to read It's fun It's a VRMMO And unlike other VRMMO's that are on this site, it comes with a twist, the twist is revealed in the first chapter. Go read it and find out, what it is

Good novel I like. Thank for the chapter ................................................................ ......................................

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Needs a little work on spelling and grammar, but if the author gets Grammarly or something similar it'll be fine. Only 3 chapters in so I can't quite have a solid review but I'll go with it. So far, its only been mentioned that MC is a neet, poor (even though he has 100,000 dollars left), yet smart. He's got a "go with the flow" attitude, and seems like the type of guy who would be relaxed even in dangerous situations. Also, this realllllyyyy copies Sword Art Online, except it has some unique things, such as the GMs actually answering a help call, and unique classes (I don't remember if SAO had unique classes actually). The MC even references sword art online when he's entering AWO too... There hasn't been much world building, actually, more like none at all. It has a good update schedule, but like I said before, it's only 3 chapters in so I can't have a firm view on it, not to mention this is a side novel with the author focusing mainly on his other novel World: The Beginning, with over a 100 chapters written.